bravo.

Beeautiful. I loved your descriptive imagery.

Sorry!! I completely gave you the opposite of what penname I thought I had on deviantart. My name there is Kurokawa-Hatake. Anyway, I really loved your story, other than being a tad bit short, it was perfect. I don't understand why it doesn't have many reviews.

brilliant story i love itasaku and i liked your other story Whisper in the Night, the Unsung Hero keep writing like this hope i'll read your other stories in the future

I loved how u described the scenery! I could literally picture it in my mind. Also it didn't matter if the story was short because it was awesome! Great job! :D

*Glomps* ~XxDarkRosexX~ XD

Mm, first review! Unless some one reviewed while I was reading... TT-TT. ANYWAY. Back to the one-shot, LOVED it like always.

Really great work!

Lady Massacre~

...wow...