worst story ever :(

I know you haven't updated in a really long time but you should continue your story! I really love it!

I know it has been a long time since you have written this, and you probably don't even remember this site. I really want you to come back and update, because this story is wonderful. I really, really like it. Even if you don't come back, I just hope you will read this and take a moment to think about the small things you do that make others happy. Anyway, I really hope you continue this. It's really good, and if you don't, I hope it is because you are busy with your writing career, which you should have.

xoxo,

BookWorm77071

come on plz plz plz write the next chapter i have been waiting forever!

Your chapter was really cool! I loved the description, and the characters. It's a great story so far!

I really like the way you write. Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!

:D

i am a huge fan of the shaddow children series, and this was really great! keep writing, because i want to read more!

Wow. Another good chapter. I do hope Roy isn't dead. I think it'd be cool if he came back later in the story.

Aww, poor Becky. I can't wait to read more. I'm glad fanfiction finally put Shadow Children on the list of books. Good job on your fic.

This is a very good start. I enjoyed it so much I would like a chapter three. I think you did a good job of making this chapter sound like the real books

i loved it so cool

Poor Becky...I hope she makes it out alive. I just love the Shadow Children Bokks! Great Chapter!