no we are getting somewhere. good so far.

I am really enjoying this story. Please continiue!

This seems way OOC for Clark, but I'm keeping an open mind until I have all the facts. So you MUST finish it. ;)

good work. please more

not bad so far. please continue.

Curious where you go with this? What happened to Kal?

Okya interesting with the backflash here. I liked the other chapters as well. I hope u add another one or rtwo. Make it interesting a fight between supermaan and batman. That would be cool.