Best story ever.

I LOVE IT KEEP WRITING STUFF SO THEY CAN BE TURNED INTO EXCELLENT YOUTUBE MATERIAL

oh no his mom dead D:

Learn to spell.

AMAZNIG.
TRULEY IT IS WORK OF ART!

this is horrible. theres no development of characters, mispelling everywhere, and overall poorly written. the plot is just SO stupid and you make these twists that would happen in a parody and yet its a serious fan fiction... just terrible
seriously, you need to study up on your writing and then youll be good. the one thing ill say thats good is in terms of dialog and format your OK.

Yes Henry Freeman, make them go Squish! }:D

Poor Henry's mom though. D:

its good

This story was so sad : why did Henry Freeman's mom had to die ? And why did she die after she was shot in the face and after Henry Freeman grabbed his mom's hand ?
Good thing Henry Freeman had the WEPON though...
"Henry Freeman knew if humens lost now it would be sad for ever." THAT line was full of WIN.
Don't stop ! Make more retarded/epic fanfiction please ! :D

This saga is just so epic (and funny). The G-mod video adaptions on YouTube are also good, but it just wouldn´t be possible without your fantastic writing.

The good= Everything (Yes, even the spelling. It´s supposed to look as though it was written by a five year old!)

The bad= Nothing whatsoever.

Summary= All hail the king of squirrels!

Not sure what characters they are talking about here but all I could see was "another guy". God how I loved "another guy". He was so full of hop. His dreams. When you typed "another guy" all I could see was his life story as it took me away into another world. Live on "another guy"...live on.

"Then a big rocket came down and blew a guys arm off..."

jesus christ

lol wut?

Best one yet!