Well you actually kept your promise of her dieing, you killed her! lol The ending did sound very cleched but in this situation it's hard to find a happy ending that isn't. So good chioce, and well written.

wow good story! Keep that up!

Nicely written. The mystery of Eruruu's vision of Hakuoru as real or not seems to have been portrayed well and added to the qualities that I liked about the story.

Write more of this soon!

Well im planning on writing my own Utawarerumono fanfic, it will be slightly different.

And i read all your stories. They where good...

I like Eruru because she is cute, and i like romance.

But i like all of the characters, they are all rich in detail and all have their destinctive charecteristics...

Meh i didnt like it... Especially when you killed of Eruru. But everyone has their own favorites.