 MithLuin 2009-09-17 . chapter 1There is a book called "Winning" about a high school football player who is paralyzed (quadriplegic, not paraplegic), and the doctor in that claimed that even a quadriplegic could have an erection and be in a sexual relationship. Something about nerves being outside the spinal column. Of course, I was in middle school, and it was fictional, too, so I don't know the truth.
But this is, I think, the first fanfic I've read that dealt with impotence as an issue, so kudos to you for going there. Other than "The Sun Also Rises" I can't think of too many published stories where it comes up, either. |
 realityfling18 2009-05-07 . chapter 1love it |
 Arkaham 2009-03-25 . chapter 1:D cute, beautiful and soft enough to cry in the middle of the night.
:D great job! |
 nequam-tenshi 2009-03-08 . chapter 1This story of your is...literally out of the blue. I never expected to have Lelouch be crippled. |
 meep 2009-03-03 . chapter 1 damn i'm emotional now. need more of this pairing! |
 kuzon234ray 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Great work!
-Ray |
 mochiusagi 2009-02-21 . chapter 1aw poor lelouch, but as long as suzaku is with him, he'll be okay. |
 Serena the Hikari of Love 2009-02-21 . chapter 1Serena:Aw! I loved it! It was amazing and so well written. Awesome job. |
 Sparxyu 2009-02-20 . chapter 1Lawli-chan! Great job! Just one question: what happened between suzaku & lelouch in thne past? i'm 2 curious not 2 know! think u should write a sequel! |
 Koneko Otome 2009-02-17 . chapter 1AW!
I love happy endings! XD
The last three lines were just adorable! |
 Nusku 2009-02-17 . chapter 1Aw cute! But poor Lulu! |
 animehamster 2009-02-17 . chapter 1Never in my life would I think this, but SXL may not be so bad as I thought if it's written this fluffy. :3
Great story, update your other story soon please~ |
 J Plash 2009-02-16 . chapter 1Well, you already know how much I possibly have a thing for blinded, mindfucked Lelouch and kind, guilt-ridden Suzaku coming along to help him heal :P -*goes back to editing Sans Pareil ch2*- XD
The angle you took at the end here was really interesting, I don't know that I've ever read anything about that before, in any context, and it's a really good thought. How emasculating that could be.
My favourite moment was definitely Suzaku's reaction to Lelouch first reaching out to touch him; the way you wrote it was beautiful (plus it's probably my very very favourite thing about blind!fic). "the caress of fingertips against his wrist...it was the oddest sensation, being touched like this – so innocently, so gently" and then having him remember that Lelouch's hostility has only let up because he doesn't know it's Suzaku; beautifully bittersweet.
The italics were a nice touch, too. |