Hey Dark Knight,

I just read your story and I enjoyed it. It's very solid and all the characters are true to the movies. I didn't catch any obvious spelling mistakes and I could picture the conversations that the characters had.

I hope you don't mind that I point out one thing. You do a fantastic job at describing the character's actions, and I realize that James Bond is supposed somewhat of a cold blooded bastard, but one reason that people read fanfiction is to find out more about the characters' thoughts, feelings, and motivations. I found you could have added more of that.

Other than that, this is just a readers opinion lol, but I think that you're talented and you should write more.

Thanks!