Aw! It's so cute! I saw the picture you drew. I nearly thought Anne was named after Anne Shirley from that book (Anne of Green Gables) until I read your notes at the end. But it's so cute! I love it!

Remarkably well done and well written. Very sweet and fluffy. :) Seriously though, the way you wrote the story from primarily Alleuiah's point of view was very keeping in character and realistic. Giving the two super soldiers a daughter was quite an unexpected surprise as well. The Christmas Truce story was also a surprise to a history buff like me. I've heard of stories where German and British troops played football together during the dreadful trenchwars but I didn't know they actually celebrated Christmas in 1914. guess that was before Nazi Germany came around.

I only have 2 gripes, one of which is that unfortunately, Sergei Smirnov was killed and did not live to see the end of the war (curse that farking a s s hole of a Andrei) so this is an Alternate universe, can't fit into cannon. The other is that the story ended rather abruptly, as I was hoping to read Colonel Smirnov reaction to Alleluiah finally come to visit.

Then again, you did convey Colonel Smirnov's feelings through Anne's story of Christmas Truce. So I take my hat off for you and once again, wish you well done.

mangaka-chan! you posted the story here too! It's still adorable, I love it so much. And EVERYONE needs to go see the pic because it is totally fluffilicious.

Very interesting look at an AU ending.