Well done! I was pleasantly surprised at how true to Edward's character this came out. Thanks for writing!

You did very well, and it did ring true! It also massively ticked me off, I had always beleived Edward blackmailed her into Marrying him, he didn't take her fears seriously. everything was what HE wanted! This is just another veiw of this! (read the actual books if you don't believe!)

i like it very good

That was a really awesome EPOV ,

yeah, I liked this story and I think you got Edward's thinking just right. I especially like the idea of him liking that he would be the one to change her too.

That was a are really good EPV. I think you captured him well.

I think you did a wonderful job. I always thought that Edward wanted to change Bella, but at the same time didn't want to take her humanity. This ploting makes a lot of sence:)

I would totally consider this being the chapter in Midnight Sun. Like, it does sound like something Edward would think of or do! Bravo!

i like this story,keep it up!

In response to your ending author's note, it rang very true. A lot of Edward POV stories with a lot of dialog from the books feels like paint-by-numbers, but this really felt natural, with the dialog naturally flowing from Edward's internal thoughts. Nicely done! :D

I really liked this , just like all your other stories ;D.

I have one question though, what did you mean by ''even Emmett'' ?

As far as I remember from the book, emmet never had an afair, and well, who would, with Rosalie as a wife, I'd tap that.

Great EPOV - you write for Ed very well.

:)

Once again an excellent short. Edward is an old fashioned kind of guy and I think that he may have used marriage as ploy but in truth its what he really wanted. One way or another he would have got his way, as it proved to be in the book. I still think she should of hit him with a baseball bat a few times for all the horror his lying and leaving did to her.

I love that you wrote this story :) I'm always wondering what Edward is thinking during all the Twilight books and I love how well you write them :) This one is another very well written piece of work :) I love it! It's very romantic and in character at the same time :) I like the way Edward thinks here :) I never thought him proposing was anything like a ploy or something because of how much he wants Bella and everything so perfectly done if you ask me! :) X Thari