I really like this story, even if it is a bit confusing at times. :P I love the background and the connection to the many characters... it's all so amazing!

Keep up the amazing work; I can't wait until you update again!!
-naomi

I was milliseconds away from dragging myself away from the computer and going to bed... and then I saw the alert for this. Sleep will have to wait. Oh well, it's for a good cause. I've been desperately searching for good fanfics recently, to the point where I found myself in two new sections on ffnet... I admit, its kinda scary. I've always avoided those two sections... Anyway, I should actually read the chapter now, huh?

I enjoyed trying to guess who all the new people were. I recognized quite a few, but Kuja threw me off. My best guess for him was actually Sephiroth... the thought of which now scares me. And I can tell some of my theories have been or will be confirmed. Like Axel and Demyx and Zexion's roles. Oh yeah, that reminds me. As soon as I remember to draw her hair and face, I can put a WIP of Peace Soldier up for you to see. No idea what reminded me of that, but whatever... I really should be taking notes on the appearances of all the major Soldiers. Eventually the Knights too. Meh, I'll start that later. Wow, this is the first review I've left in a long time where the screen started flickering back and forth because I've typed so much. This chapter, this story, and you most definitely deserve it.

-Kiki

GAH! Please don't stop! You have me on edge ust waiting to see what hapens next! Please hurry with the next chapters! OH! Do you know how many chapters there will be?

Ooh, Kairi's about to get her memories back. Sweet. And Namine's angry... not sweet. She's scary when she's angry, because it's out of character for her. At least to me. I definitely get the feeling that her being angry this time is a good thing though.

Hmm... well, at least I guessed right that Axel was a knight. Got the name wrong though. xD Oh well.

Next chapter should be pretty interesting. Yay for time travel!

Good luck with NaNoWriMo. I'm still debating whether or not to participate this year. I need to decide soon, huh? It starts tomorrow. xD

-Kiki

Sweet! The plot's really moving now, huh? I really want to try to draw Kairi in her Soldier uniform... mind if I ask some questions about it? Is the skirt plain pink or pink plaid? Where on the tie is the heart clasp? And that's all I can think of. I think I should be able to draw it pretty well.

Yay for being mysteriously transported to empty spaces with stained glass platforms! I'll go ahead and venture a guess that the empty circles will eventually be filled with portraits of the various Knights? The four cats are obviously the Guardians.

Storm and Floral? Marly and Larxene? Yay.

Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

-Kiki

Changing the uniforms would be cool. The thought of everyone in sailor fukus kinda freaks me out anyway. xD

Ooh, cool! Reality-Namine saw Heart Soldier and Love Soldier transform back. So does that mean she'll regain her abilities and become Peace Soldier soon? Or maybe she'll just think that she was seeing things. I have no idea, I'm just asking random questions to take up space. Because I hate leaving short reviews. Because I'm weird like that.

And now we know that the Mysterious White Figure from the dream is really the White Rose Knight. Sweet. I'm still pretty sure I know who the White Rose Knight really is. Guess we'll find out soon. Maybe. I have no idea.

Prince Ienzo. Epic win. And coincidentally, Demyx starts having troubles with Zexion right when Kairi finds out the truth about the prince. I love it when I can connect the dots before things happen. I can't do it very often, but when I can do it, it's fun.

And I love how the people targeted by the Heartless are the unawakened Soldiers. xD Convenient, right?

Awesome chapter, but then your chapters always are. :D

-Kiki

I had forgotten about the White Knight, but now I remember... and now I have a theory. Which, from my vague memories of Sailor Moon, I know I will love.

Yay! Roxas or Cloud as Sailor Strength's guardian! I'm thinking Roxas. I'm also trying to guess the name of Sailor Strength... Quistis is the only name that comes to mind. Okay, never mind. Roxas is definitely Sailor Strength's guardian. Because the White Knight ran off toward a different spiky haired figure... which I'm assuming is Cloud. Okay. I think I get it.

I noticed a tiny discrepancy. Early in the chapter, Selphie calls Kairi on what I thought was a cell phone. Then later Kairi complains to Tidus about not having a cell phone? That confused me a bit. And you spelled the word ran wrong in this sentence - “I got so scared that I practically wan all the way back home."

Other than that, loved the chapter. And the things I mentioned were all fairly minor, so they didn't really bother me. I just thought I should mention them.

-Kiki

So glad I got to read this tonight, especially after I saw the alert. If I had seen the alert and not been able to read it tonight, it would have bothered me for the next two days that I won't have much computer access.

Aha! No, wait. My partially formed theory that I apparently didn't write down about Yuffie just died. However, we now know a little more. Woot.

Somehow I get the feeling that there won't be "dream" and "reality" chapters soon. Everything's really blurring together.

Ah, poor Nami. Still completely clueless. I can say this with confidence, since I'm almost positive I know who the Mysterious Warrior is. Heh.

Awesomeness.

-Kiki

Yeah Yuffie appears XDD
I love this story so much
Keep writing pleasee

Woohoo, Yuffie appears! And I knew Selphie had to show up in the dream world sometime soon. Sailor Passion? It definitely fits. Selphie is quite... passionate is the polite term. I tend to call it obsessive.

I think I know who Sailor Love is, just from my vague memories of Sailor Moon, even vaguer memories of Greek and Roman mythology, and how this story has gone so far. Still completely clueless on Sailor Strength though. And I totally missed whoever was with Yuffie too. I want to guess Cloud though. I'm not sure why. Roxas can't be Sailor Strength... he's a guy. I'm still convinced he's a guardian. Hopefully not part cat though, because then he couldn't be with Axel... Whatever. I trust that you'll make it work somehow. Hmm... maybe Yuffie was hanging out with... oh wait, I missed a major phrase there. Yuffie is hanging out with either Cloud or Roxas! How could I have missed the phrase about the spiky blond hair? Ugh. Guess I'm just tired. I should go to bed.

-Kiki

Oh my gosh! That was totally awesome! Finally, the great Yuffie appears! And, I'm betting it was Leon with her? Ooh, I can't wait! I'm trying to figure out if she's a Sailor, Guardian or the Princess. I don't think she's the princess, but still, can't exactly narrow it down yet! And, poor Namine, stressing over the Warrior kissing her. She shouldn't be, though, considering Olette is the warrior, but still! ... She is, right? I'm not just confused, am I?

Anyways! Totally awesome, and I can't wait for the next one! It's gotten a lot less cornier than the beginning, and I'm finding myself totally in love with this fic.

-snorts- Sorry... I can't help but laugh cause Sailor Moon was so bloody cheesy! Even in the original. No /Leon's/ Sailor strength and sailor heart'll end up being someone else... No wait Olette right? Hmnnmnm

I just realized... four things? I'm proud of myself now. Didn't think I'd have that much energy after flaming an art thief all morning.

I really think I should start keeping a list of theories related to this story. It might help me. Think I'll go do that. Then I'll go and work more on SGYM and my chores.

I just realized something else. Going to write things down now.

Oh yeah. Yay Yuffie!

-Kiki

Whoo! Read this all in one sitting and I love love love the way theres a dream world and a reality ^^
Uhh...theres so much more I could say but IDK, I just really love this fic lol
I have to admit the magical girl/sailor moon thing is a bit cheesy, but i'm still enjoying it haha
and Yuffie/Kairi is my favorite KH couple, so I'm excitedly waiting for Yuffie to show up ^^
Kep writing! =D

Yay for Namine. And I get the feeling that Reno being suspicious is a bad thing. Maybe not. I'm still a bit jet lagged, I guess. And apparently it could take a month for my sleep schedule to become normal again...

Well, I know I'd like to see Selphie as one of the other Sailor's. And I'd like to see Yuffie some time soon, but I don't know where I want her to show up... or, if it's in the dream world, who I want her to show up as. I'm sure you know what you're doing, and whoever Yuffie shows up as will be fine with me. The world Passion makes me think of Selphie though... hmm... well, I'll find out when I find out.

-Kiki