Brilliant, you have a Pratchett style of writing ^^
That's just how I would have imagined Ponder babysitting, hilarious :)

Oh, this is just hilarious! It was great to see poor Ponder's struggles as he tried to teach little Sam about Schrodinger's Cow...at least he didn't have to help the kid reach that other toddler milestone, toilet training. ;) I have to wonder how parents would do that without the benefit of indoor toilets or potty-training videos... Anyway, I just loved your razor-sharp wit - Mr. Pratchett would surely be proud. I hope to read more from you!

I loved this!

But it reminded me of Magical Trevor...
if you dont know what that is type it into youtube.lol its funny.

Really good Job though!
yay
Ponder

heehee, loved it ^^
But pretty, pretty please do another one like this with Miss Susan! xx

Poor Sam... or poor Stibbons? ^^
(the dialog between them is really funny)

I can't help but think that Susan would have been a better choice. X)

Hey glad to see this posted on !

Still love it and I have such a funny image in my mind of an adult Young Sam eying cardboard boxes suspiciously and not understanding why. XD

Ponder teaching a three year old? Haha, very funny! I thought Young Sam's reaction to Ponder's teaching perfect, exactly what a real toddler would do!

You might want to break up some of the long paragraphs though, I found some of it a little hard going.