| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Foreign Magic |
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Amazyrak 5/6/13 . chapter 14Why are there no updates? * pouts * |
Mirage 3/26/13 . chapter 14 Ohhhhhhhh noooooooo...why did you do this? write a nice really nice and interresting story...and then stop at such a point... i want to know when Herm and Sev get together and how-or bether if they come together. And also when those threesome get together, when Lucius, Harry nd Draco find out what they are-what they are to oneanother-that they make each other whole... i mean it sound as if they are creatures, soulmates and more! I love it with the smell thing, the feeling they find out they have, the little games and fights and a bit loving and that they stalk each other. it great and also that they make only out now and then a bit, and dont jump in bed like in some other storys...that is more interresting! i think you really shoud write more chapters, lots of more chapters soon, its a long time, or pease find somebody who is good and likes to take over and write oneday to an end kick voldi, bella, pansy, the stupid rat...hit some sence in narzissas mind...and give Sevi some rest, the poor guy |
JosiScharman 3/18/13 . chapter 14please more... i love the fic. kiss. Josi |
YogurtLuver12 3/11/13 . chapter 1you should update it soon its, good |
MiniSchmidty 2/12/13 . chapter 14Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE! Finish this story. I completely understand that rl takes over but I am obsessed I need t know what happens! Love MS |
LianaRamsay 1/20/13 . chapter 14I really hope you decide to continue this, it's really different, and really good as well. |
yxz 1/18/13 . chapter 14 You should update the story, its really great |
yodel 1/9/13 . chapter 14 goodd storyy, please update soon :) |
Person No. 1 1/1/13 . chapter 14Please continue |
darkangel325 12/30/12 . chapter 14this is nuts... |
ZeoRegrediens 12/17/12 . chapter 6Woo! Now we're getting somewhere! :P |
ZeoRegrediens 12/16/12 . chapter 1Wow. These chapters are enormous. It's taking a while to get into things, but the way you write is really great. It reminds me more of an actual novel than simply fanfiction (which usually jumps straight into the fantasy and takes advantage of the already well-known characters to skip the proper intro). But this feels so much closer to a real Potter novel. And I can see hints of what is to come here and there. I find myself trying to work things out and wondering why you bring certain things to attention. (Vernon's behaviour is killing me. What was up with him..? And the palm-readings for Harry and Draco were interesting..). I'm usually not very patient to get into the real plot in fanfiction because if I wanted a proper novel to read at the moment, I would do so, but this story has me intrigued. So I'll stick with it and I hope we see some Malfoy plot soon. :D I, too, like the idea of Harry with "two strong, beautiful men". |
A Nest of Nargles 12/3/12 . chapter 14this story is bloody brilliant. |
Vicki219 11/14/12 . chapter 14Very intriguing story so far. Hope you update more soon please |
Jak 11/9/12 . chapter 1 I hope you decide to continue. |