 redx117 2009-03-29 . chapter 4Oh this is getting good. Keep up the good work, this story is actually really addicting. I really need to know more, PLEASE update SOON!! :) |
 Styloz 2009-03-19 . chapter 4This is a great story just like Spotlight :)
Update when you can ^^ |
 gigil12345 2009-03-14 . chapter 4I love this so much!
pls update soon! |
 NaminexSora lover 2009-03-12 . chapter 4Really good Chapter! I loved it! :D
Ooh, it looks like Sora is developing some feelings for Namine! ^_^
Roxas really needs to know to be quiet when he's eavesdropping, or he's going to get attacked like what almost happened at the bar! ^^ But, at least he got some new leads for the case! Now, I wonder what Namine is going to find out from Riku's stuff.
I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! :) |
 DarkSmile 2009-03-12 . chapter 4aww I kinda feel bad for Sora looks like he has a little crushie but he's married , really enjoying this fic update soon ;p |
 little dhampir-93 2009-03-11 . chapter 4i love this story, it's really interesting. i'm really looking forward to read the next chapter! please update as soon as you can :) |
 DW64 2009-03-11 . chapter 4Good chapter. Keep on going! |
 Alice Dark 2009-03-04 . chapter 1really good, no awsome ^_^ keep it up |
 Kit-Kat-Wafer 2009-03-04 . chapter 3 Whee, update soon :D This story is great, so I hope you can write the next chapter... :)
I'm a bit confused about Riku, though. It seems suspicious that he didn't take any of his clothes... i wonder what Namine will get from it. |
 NaminexSora lover 2009-03-03 . chapter 3This was a really good chapter! ^^ Very emotional and I learned a bit of Riku's past.
Oh, Poor Riku's mom, having to learn that her son had just been shot/killed must be terribly hard.
I can't wait to read the next chapter! Like what Namine is going to discover from Riku's old things. Please update soon! :D
P.S: I got your message, and thanks so much for the compliment! I promise to update soon and add more fluff! XD |
 XloneXwriter 2009-03-03 . chapter 3Oh... wow... Why did Riku leave all his stuff behind?
Please update soon! |
 DW64 2009-03-03 . chapter 3Great chapter! Update soon! |
 Destiny'sHeroine 2009-03-03 . chapter 2 A part of me wants to believe who the killer is, considering the clues, and if it really is a woman. Of course, who else will fit it honestly? But that's why I don't want to jump to conclusions either. However, she works alone, or she works for...someone else :P.
And finally, we start getting a glimpse of Naminé power. |
 NaminexSora lover 2009-03-02 . chapter 2Wow! This chapter was really good! :D
I love how you made Namine a Psychometry! ^^
Hmm, I have the feeling I know who Riku's killer is, yet I don't know what you have planned, I could be totally wrong!
Sora really was stubborn in this chapter. If he really wants to know who killed his friend, he should try anything, like a physic, to help him. Oh well! :D
I really loved this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! ^^ |
 NaminexSora lover 2009-03-02 . chapter 1Hiya! ^^
Thanks so much for your comment of "French" And Thanks for suggesting that I read your story! And I must admit, this story is really cool! :D
I liked how the chapter started. It was like a normal, typical story then- BAM! Riku gets shot in front of Namine after she finally meets him again. That part really caught my attention! Who would want to kill Riku? I guess I shall have to read and find out!
Again, This was an amazing chapter! It was so intense! I also love that Sora and Roxas are brothers/detectives. Having Sora and Roxas be brothers really adds to the love triangle you metioned. Anyway, awesome job with this first chapter! ^^ Off to read chapter 2! |