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redx117
2009-03-29 . chapter 4
Oh this is getting good. Keep up the good work, this story is actually really addicting. I really need to know more, PLEASE update SOON!! :)
Styloz
2009-03-19 . chapter 4
This is a great story just like Spotlight :)

Update when you can ^^
gigil12345
2009-03-14 . chapter 4
I love this so much!

pls update soon!
NaminexSora lover
2009-03-12 . chapter 4
Really good Chapter! I loved it! :D

Ooh, it looks like Sora is developing some feelings for Namine! ^_^

Roxas really needs to know to be quiet when he's eavesdropping, or he's going to get attacked like what almost happened at the bar! ^^ But, at least he got some new leads for the case! Now, I wonder what Namine is going to find out from Riku's stuff.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! :)
DarkSmile
2009-03-12 . chapter 4
aww I kinda feel bad for Sora looks like he has a little crushie but he's married , really enjoying this fic update soon ;p
little dhampir-93
2009-03-11 . chapter 4
i love this story, it's really interesting. i'm really looking forward to read the next chapter! please update as soon as you can :)
DW64
2009-03-11 . chapter 4
Good chapter. Keep on going!
Alice Dark
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
really good, no awsome ^_^ keep it up
Kit-Kat-Wafer
2009-03-04 . chapter 3
Whee, update soon :D This story is great, so I hope you can write the next chapter... :)

I'm a bit confused about Riku, though. It seems suspicious that he didn't take any of his clothes... i wonder what Namine will get from it.
NaminexSora lover
2009-03-03 . chapter 3
This was a really good chapter! ^^ Very emotional and I learned a bit of Riku's past.

Oh, Poor Riku's mom, having to learn that her son had just been shot/killed must be terribly hard.

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Like what Namine is going to discover from Riku's old things. Please update soon! :D

P.S: I got your message, and thanks so much for the compliment! I promise to update soon and add more fluff! XD
XloneXwriter
2009-03-03 . chapter 3
Oh... wow... Why did Riku leave all his stuff behind?
Please update soon!
DW64
2009-03-03 . chapter 3
Great chapter! Update soon!
Destiny'sHeroine
2009-03-03 . chapter 2
A part of me wants to believe who the killer is, considering the clues, and if it really is a woman. Of course, who else will fit it honestly? But that's why I don't want to jump to conclusions either. However, she works alone, or she works for...someone else :P.

And finally, we start getting a glimpse of Naminé power.
NaminexSora lover
2009-03-02 . chapter 2
Wow! This chapter was really good! :D

I love how you made Namine a Psychometry! ^^

Hmm, I have the feeling I know who Riku's killer is, yet I don't know what you have planned, I could be totally wrong!

Sora really was stubborn in this chapter. If he really wants to know who killed his friend, he should try anything, like a physic, to help him. Oh well! :D

I really loved this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! ^^
NaminexSora lover
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
Hiya! ^^

Thanks so much for your comment of "French" And Thanks for suggesting that I read your story! And I must admit, this story is really cool! :D

I liked how the chapter started. It was like a normal, typical story then- BAM! Riku gets shot in front of Namine after she finally meets him again. That part really caught my attention! Who would want to kill Riku? I guess I shall have to read and find out!

Again, This was an amazing chapter! It was so intense! I also love that Sora and Roxas are brothers/detectives. Having Sora and Roxas be brothers really adds to the love triangle you metioned. Anyway, awesome job with this first chapter! ^^ Off to read chapter 2!
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