finish story more donnie/raph

Your story was just too cute for words. I love how only Raphael came to Donnie. Because too often it the last person you think would never come would be the only one. XD

You did great keeping it light first, and able to deepen the story without draggig the flow. I love how sweet it ended, and I dearly hope that Raph will get Donnie this time.
Keep up the wonderful work!

This is really sweet! I like how you tied in 'SAINW', too. :)

aw, sweet little turtle fluff. ^_^ cute, cute, cute! hoping for more.

I'm not normally into 'cest stories, cos most people can't tell them in the right way, or they just decide to make it full on dirty (usually, these are not TMNT fans, but probably sad people with nothing better to do), but this one is very good.

I like the way you have made it into a sweet brotherly moment as well, and haven't just made it outright perverted (well, not yet - I hope you won't in part 2!).

Keep going, your writing style is brilliant!

AW...CUTE! More?^^

Yehehes. Come to the 'cest side. We have... well, cest.


I love Don/Raph stories, I just think they balance each other so well, don't you? And I can so see Raph showing up for this, just like 'ah I look like a moron', but he knows it's important to Don and awe.

^^ And I, in turn, have taken YOUR fic's review virginity.

God, I am SO glad you've gone the cest-way! You do some of the best I've read, like, EVER. This was funny and sweet all in one! Best quotes:

"Their younger brother would spend hours making up Bowser jokes, or maybe force Casey to dress up as Mario to fight the evil turtle…"

"“I need ta protect ya, Don.” Raph’s hand is trembling ever so slightly. “If this’ll help, then I’ll…”"

^Loved those. Right there. Awesome. Beautiful. Other praising words. You go with your mad skills!