You should have each madian find a love like lily did.

That heartless little monster.

First off, I want to apologize for not reviewing this sooner.

Second, I am thoroughly impressed. This is a different sort of thing from your show-like writings and it was a welcome change.

The whole story felt very Redwall in the characters and the language. Your characters were charming and real, and fun to read about. There was plenty of drama and comedy, that were all very well balanced. I especially liked a good vermin character, and a not so nice woodland character.

Sequels sound like a great idea. I'm looking forward to them.

Aw, I'm glad to see that they all got their happy ending. Or, at least, Lily and Dakar got their happy ending, and the other three flowers are well on their way to getting their happy endings.

I'll look forward to the sequels, though. Which reminds me, when you have the time, look for some PMs regarding The Return. Nothing bad, I assure you.

A very enjoyable story, and now I'm thinking of a movie, whats it called? Ballet shoes? lol

The conflict should have something to do with Pansy's mother, I think, and why exactly she left her with Lily and Markas. Perhaps she was a fugitive from a corrupt ruler? Perhaps said corrupt ruler was also connected with the deaths of Primrose's family?

Just a thought. I try not to make things to cliche when I write. I've started writing an original story, and I'm now realizing that one character bears annoyingly uncanny resemblances to Prince Zuko from Avatar: The Last Airbender (one of my new Lust Objects. Lucky him.) It's quite irritating, really. They even have a scar on the same side of the face. *headwalls*

YAY!


It's DONE!

Finally! Yes! Woohoo!

THROW A PARTY!

The last part of this chapter was written in a very Redwall-esque tone, and I suppose I enjoyed that. Not much to say, and besides, I need to do my homework...

Really and truely, I do!

Well, it's been a nice ride. Personally, I'm comfortable with how this ended-I think it was wrapped up fine. I do not want sequel...I'd rather let my mind figure out how it all ends. :D

Best of luck to you in the future! Happy Saint Patrick's Day!

YAY! A SEQUEL!
i'll definitely be reading that when it comes out

Lily did deserve her happy ending... I can't wait for the next installment, you have true talent and I'll be ready and waiting to review some more!

2 main points...

1.) YAY! Mwahaha, I expressed concerns :D

2.) SEQUEL TIME! :D

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So, a great ending to a great fic with probable great sequels coming along. I look forward to it :)
~FOG

First of all... I CALLED IT! (oh wait, everyone else did too...)

Second of all... YES! I was cheering during the end of this chapter :D Dakar and Lily end up together! YAY! This is like what I wanted!

I look forward to seeing how this fic ends!

This was a well-written chapter and I wish you the very best in your closing chapter!
~FOG

Aaw! The last few chapters are just so cute! Yippee for Lily and Dakar! Yay!

Loved how the others were watching them as they danced. Typical sister/aunt/crazy uncle move, there.

And it looks like there's hope in the future for Rogak and Primrose too. Swell.

I'd been wondering when those necklaces would turn up. Interesting.

Ohemgee! I can't wait to hear the stories! That was soo romantic! *fangirl squeal*

No... He didn't die, he couldn't have!

(blinks)

Necklaces? I don't remember any of those...

Personally, half-way through that speech, I woulda slapped him. :D

That's me, though...

Yay, they got together...

But something's off... "They were ALL not very good at singing, anyways..."

Isn't Primrose a fairly good singer? I thought she was...

Ah, Markas's 'ball of fur with sticky paws' thing was funny, especially compared to how Primrose is now. :D Very nice, I say, very nice...

Thank you for the small mention. I like how you didn't show her vomiting (to be clear), but gave a hint at what happened. Thank you-very good job with that, I think...

Well, best of luck with the last chapter, and thanks for the ride!