Fabulous!

.. That was the most twisted version of Romeo and Juliet ever! Still love your story though ..

Eep Misa you psyco bitch how could you!

It was very good don't worry oh and light you shouldn't blow misa of for your own saftey!

CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...

PEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

O_O I guess after being used by Light for the whole canon story and giving away half her life a few times, Misa got revenge in this fic. I sort of expected him to kill her with the Death Note at some point, I guess the notebooks are not in their hands in this universe?

Anyways, very well written, props on your story :-D

There should be a sequal where the police find the body. This is good.

I stabbed myself in the gum with a toothpick by accident while reading this.

I also cringed. Fuck you man, fuck you.

Also, I liked the story.

Holy f* shit!

I could actually feel the pain my right hand that Light was feeling in his left.

I feel so sorry for him- Light, a strong man unable to be controlled by anyone is captured, tortured, and killed by a sadistic/masochist woman.

I feel defeated after reading this... BUT, you pulled it off so well. I give you sincere props :)

Holy Shit!

Crazy bitch.

I give you props though. You do a good job making Misa crazy (I always thought she was anyway). I never liked Misa, but this decks the cake. However, I like your talent :)

Holy crap, this was amazing! I'd just finished reading Higurashi-When they cry; Abducted by demons Arc, and I was totally like "Whoa, deja-vu man." It also made me think of songs like "Paparazzi" and "Obesessed", if that makes any sense.

Anyway, love it!

WOW. (Yes.. I should be sleeping lmfao sh) That... was just awesome. I never pictured Misa as a psycho killer.. (but definitely crazy.) This was done wonderfully. And actually, I don't think Misa really seemed too OOC. Light was rather OOC, but it can't be held against you. The personality you gave him fit right into the story perfectly. I think it might have been harder to write if he'd been completely IC.

Again, lovely job

-M-

holy shit that was amazing i love misa dark personality

WHAT.

...

WHAT.

I'm practically fucking speechless over here. That was terrible. (but at the same time, oh so amazing. ) MISA IS CLEARLY YOUR MOTHER, RAITO. HOW COULD YOU NOT KNOW? D:

Seriously, that was all kinds of fucked up, but still really interesting. I wish someone had, like, saved Raito. Oh well. Good job... I think.

I like the little haiku you mentioned in your note from the first chapter. Any idea who wrote it?

OMG that was brilliant but sad...i feel sorry for Light though...Misa seemed crazy and scary to me...thanx for writing...

...MISA IS SCARY PERSON... *shivers* Great torture scenes tho, even when they creep me out... cuz that's what they're supposed to do, yes?

Nice, nice. Pretty. Descriptive. And definitely horror. '

:D