this is great! definitely not OOC =]you portrayed them both perfectly. I also loved the situation XD

Hello. I know you indicated you didn't care for comments that didn't pertain to whether or not you captured the characters personalities but I just have to say one thing. It may be in your best interest to give your work another read over. You typed "Bed Wade" once lol. I'm by NO MEANS laughing at you. The lol is just because that to me, somebunny had sex on their mind when thinking of Ben huh? "Bed. Ben." :) Also you wrote "breath" when I do believe you meant "breathe". Ok enough of that crap. I can't spell for **. I too of course make mistakes just like everybody else and unless someone is shooting for a Pulitzer then imho fanfic stories with such insignificant errors are totally acceptable.

I think it's great you wrote in this fandom. I've only started reading it myself however I've been a fan of these two having a bromance for quite sometime. The chemistry coming from Russell towards Christian I believe was really obvious and that as far as characters go..well, Wade did have a thing for Dan.. and with that in said I could totally see every body moment and accentuated word coming from Wade. You wrote him perfectly!

You want to know if you "can" write? Yes. You did a great job. Everything was cohesive, fluent, good transitionss and fairly well-wriiten. Great job keep it up and thanx for sharing.
Peace \/

thank you for writing this pairing, i wish there was more stuff for them.

As always, i am a huge fan of yours!