I really enjoy this different take on the girls.

The first chapter was a great way to set the mood for this fic.

This has been so action packed that I can't decide which part I liked the most. It's all so good. Please update soon!

Bruteaous, Bruteaous, Bruteaous. I warn you: this is the promised threat of me long review!
First of all I would like to say that the news of the new chapter to this godly fictional addiction of mine made me choke in the middle of my economics class when I got the alert on my phone and I embarrassed myself slightly. SO this review is very much delayed because I wanted to give a really good one where I could sit down and pour out my never-ending love for the glory of this story and praise you and your brain for coming up with it and furthermore, of course, your fingers for typing it out. And yes, I have read the chapter three times since you’ve updated lol.
Where to start?
Minako’s volleyball moment was pretty funny, and her “operation relieve monumental stress” and “operation get her life out of the gutter” actually felt a bit déjà vu to me as I have with various sports, found myself exercising out angers and though my situation at the time was not identical to Minako’s it was similar to the feelings you used to describe Minako’s emotions and thus I found the whole part very well-written and descriptive. And of course you continued writing very good details throughout as well, but I felt the most connection with this part. LOL, so I had one moment of silliness I thought I should share: when you wrote “they sat on top of Minako’s chest and festered there like a bad case of heart burn” I totally chime “hey Pepto-Bismol!” in my head hahahahah
Silliness aside, for the duration of this chapter I just wanted to hug Minako! Honestly, it so tragic but beautifully confusing for the story. I love the circumstances set up in this story, the drama is just awesome. I love drama! Totally wanted to give her parents a smack. Pluto’s little cameo was pretty dope. Like when I watch the anime one of my favourite things was Pluto’s ‘Dead Scream’ and this random episode where she shows up licking ice cream. I lol’d because I thought of her doing both of those haha
The emotions in this chapter are pretty dark but the way you write when focusing on Minako or Rei and Artemis and even Hisao is also pretty damn funny. Like I sais and repeat, your descriptions are just ** awesome. I’m reading a sentence and I get all ‘aw’ and then wham there’s some random line that totally has me snort (no choking this time lol). I am a fan of your humour. We’ll call it Bruteaousumour!
:D
Ok onto my favourite parts! I love all aspects of your story but I find myself naturally extra excited when romantic parts arise.
I have to say something about Keiko: I really like her. Like, I LOVE Minako and Rei but the way you write Keiko and Rei is also very adorable and I love the idea of a broken heart and seeing it being set up. Is that... psychopathic? LOL anyways, Keiko is a very likeable character and her revelation to even noticing Rei when they were younger just damn CUTE. And I must wonder when Keiko told Rei to think of her as a fire vision and hop to it, was that or was that not her being incredibly horny? :P
It’s cool to see how, if it weren’t for the connection of Mars and Venus, Keiko could possibly have been an OC capable of being with Rei, which makes heartbreak (whenever it comes and whoever’s hearts I broken) that much more enjoyable and intense.
I find strange similarities with Aiko and Rei and then again with Keiko and Minako. Onyl small things mind you, but still ironic. I don’t know if you intended a bit of this?
OK I hope you have not fallen asleep with my long-** review there.
Onto...
dun-dun-dun!
MY FAVOURITE PART! (HANDS DOWN)
Of course, the Rei/Minako part.
I was on the edge of my ** seat every time I read this part! It was like a movie scene reeling in my mind and I was so very into it. The way you described Minako’s eyes widening at Rei, to the way she focused on her and then when she saw Rei with Keiko was just. Awesome. **. Awesome. !
And then the locker confrontation? LOVE IT! Like OMG your Bruteaousumour is really battling with your Bruteaousomeness. I liked the idea you had of Rei feeling that connection they had and even knowing Minako’s name. Total Genius.
PS. This most certainly is kicking life’s **, eh? You pimp, you! LOL looking forward to more!

aw i love this! pls continue! you are a very good writer

uh cute indeed! I like it... even though it is VERY slow... i know it had to be done to set the mood XD and well to know the characters i guess... i want MORE REINAKO XD Cant wait damn it!

Yay they finally meet again. Rei needs to get rid of that annoying gf of hers.

dude, this story? = EPIC

please please PLEASE update soon. This is getting so good. Even the OC's are bearable and I usually hate OCs. :P Thanks a lot for the good read!

I was really happy when I saw that you'd updated this story. It's just what I needed to take my mind of the stress that school is currently creating - though I shouldn't be complaining because you're bound to be working harder than I am *and* you're not complaining about it. I really liked some of Minako's musings about love; it harkens back to the whole idea in the Sailor V manga that she was cursed never to love. I really liked how you wrote the fight scene from Artemis' perspective; I don't think I've seen that done before. The last two scenes of this chapter were absolutely hilarious. This chapter was a wonderful mix of angst, romance, action and humour. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of this.

I absolutely love the locker scene in this chapter. Minako is so smooth.

Can't wait for your next update.

awesomely long, but interesting. crazy to see what minako ment by see you tomorow casanova:P

Awesome story!

joy! my favourite story is updated!!
You did a really good job with describing Artemis's 'catness' and i enjoyed his little snippet with Minako, especially the whole fat implication tease haha
Hmm, you definately surpised me with the school thing. I thought there would be some big rei and minako thing with 'omg she goes to schol with me' but your meandering of their meeting only fuels the fire so to speak, and i love it! Now i am much more eager to see how their relationship starts to play out, i can think of many ways myself but those are only thoughts of a reader 'in heat' haha
Lol Keiko reminds me of the typical 'demanding' girlfriend, and i must admit i thougth rei was extrememly adorable as she was left to slam her locker door after their morning sweetness-turned-fight happened
All the characters and their feelinga are well-portrayed for a really awesomeread here. Personally i enjoyed Hisao's bullying part that contrasted to his brotherly part. Aiko amused me lolI look forward to more!

haha aw keiko and rei's little morning fight was cute :P
Aiko got a little crushy-wushy on minako? so sweet in a wierd way lol
now, i simpl can't wait to see rei or minako's face when they meet again or whatever it is you're going to have happenI can picture minako going all 'casanova?' or something lol unless you're going to keep off them meeting each other... whatever, i'll just patiently wait for your next chapter
i love the length of your chapter too, makes the read more worth-the-whiles

so hisao is going to be with the dark kingdom? that only makes the fun thoughts of what could happen in your story more so
now hisao makes more sense, but i cna't help but think how an evil hisao would be with his cute little sister...

hahaha rei and keiko make me laugh - they are soo cute strangey enough tho
thank you thank you for not having minako and rei meet the first day at school haha, in ym own story i have those two become friends at the school but i'm rapidly liking your version much more
loved the volleyball thing, and artemis and minako as always have cute dynamics
so hiao makes more sense now, i look forward to what you will bring!

i'm intregued. i like the direction you're taking the story and thoroughly enjoy your writing style. please continue!