awwww. that's really sweet.

It's so great to see other people who have also enjoyed the Castaways series - especially ones who then go ahead and write in it! Great job! I loved the interaction between Ben and Ned, and the last bit was very sweet.

About the one suggestion I would make is grammar - nothing major, but I think it's supposed to be "their" instead of "they're" in the first line, and I've heard that there are always supposed to be commas before and after a person's name when someone is talking to them. But those are really minor issues.

Besides that, you did some very lovely work; the story itself was wonderfully done, and I can't wait to see what else you've written and what else you might write for these books in the future!

Cute. I liked it, and the little reference to Serafina at the end fitted perfectly.

:)

clouded horizon

Yeah, I was wondering who the third one was...

I like the line "We’ve known each other for almost two hundred and sixty years. I would have expected that we had passed needing a subject" It made me laugh.

Well written!

Oh, wow. That was brilliant.

And sweet.

The only thing I noticed was a few grammar errors. But that's not that big a deal, now is it?

Great story! _

Aw. So sad! But true too, I kind of agree actually... with Ben I mean, about the people's souls thing. It makes sense in my head. Wow, you really turned this into a whole spiritual thing. Good for you. God, I cant write anything real spirity, I'm just so bad at it.

But this, this was really good.

Short and simple but I gives you a message that really makes you think.