Great fic. You must cont.

finish it already!

shesh

This is the first i've heard of this story. And i have to tell you, i think it's DAMN good! But what was Usagi saying to Mamoru and Motoki?

how can you end it there? how am i ever going to learn about how everyone gets hppy and yay! excited type of fellings since they're legit now. i think thats what would happen at least but i can't know for sure unless its written by the author!

Ooooh...I'm intrigued! (isn't that cheesy?).

continue continue! Continue! Please . . . .

Definitely original somewhat interesting but a little on the dull side with a slight touch of cheesiness with the names

I congratulate you for your effort in weaving all these complicated ideas (and ideas i would have never thought would ever come together) in this amusing fanfiction. Who would have thought, that Mamoru's green jacket could mean so much, ne? Well i just wanted to say that would came upon something TRULY unique and you deserve to be recognized. I'll be waiting for the next installment.

You got me all extra pissed off at Toki-kun

::pouts::! Make Mamo-chan explain to Toki-kun the whole thing... I don't want Toki-kun and Mamo-chan to not be friends! I'm *very* demanding, aren't I? I hope there's action in the next chapter, ciao!

this is getting good and you had better get the next chapter out soon or I won't be responsible for my actions. J/K;)

This story is developing nicely. Please post soon.

ackk!How mean!Leaving us hanging!Please write more soon k?

Silver-chan

this story is excellent! i like the originality and plot of it. please, continue!

i love this!

damn good continue!