This was very cute!

Aw.
I gotta say, I love your writing skills!
Everything about this was just so wonderfully described. x)
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aww it's so cutee :]

Lovely! I like the way you write. A little errors but the plot was fantastic and you really made the ending very enjoyable to read. It's awesome.

That was incredibly well written ^^;!

I like how you portrayed all the characters, just like they are but a bit more realistic and fun ^^. The awkward final scene before the release of tension and ah! HitsuHina love is so

Well you already know I loved it, but I just wanted to tell you again! ^_^

Very cute!! I loved it and I love this pairing. I also like the way that you take some moments to put things a little less formally. Keep up the good work.

And I love thsis pairing!! Write more (since I can barely find any well-written HitsuHina stories.

oh hell, this was great. i need more fic from you, you always give me excellent hitsuhina! and how novel that shirou has turned into a pervy little man who steals girls hair ties. lol. least it wasn't underwear.

~cd

That was good!!:) I loved it!!:) I nearly died laughing when Momo asked if he wore them!!:) I can't wait to see the picture too!!:) Good job!!:)