absolutely brilliant. easily one of the best stories i have ever read. you have the charecters perfectly, i love the bond between jasper and rosalie, because they are quite similar in a way.

carlisle's pov is brilliant, i'd love to see it from jasper's if you write it, or any of the other's as well! D

really amazing, it's going on my favourites. i love it.

dobby

Wow. That's about all i'm ready to say. Really well written, good Jasper theories, and love carlisle's take on his children. Great oneshot.

I liked this a lot. It was a beautiful, well-written story and an unusual POV. Thanks!

Hi

I'd just like to say that this is an amazing story and is written really well.

I'm also going to beg you to continue this story as you're such a good writer :D

Please Please Please continue this story

Amazing, absolutely amazing...

wow. this is an amazing story. i like how you focused on jasper alot, he's my favorite character. i also loved seeing him through carlisle's eyes. i do wish there would have been a bit more with jasper and edward though. not having so much alice and jasper was a bit refreshing from how much there already is, i like to see jasper reacting to the other cullens. you're an awesome writer, deffinatley keep writing.

wow... I really like how you've told jasper's story. I really love how you made him and alice more animalistic than the others, like the purring, and the growling... Carlisle was an interesting choice to tell this story from, but it was well done. The only constructive criticisms I have is to re-read it with a fine tooth comb, or grab someone else to read it, just to pick of the spelling errors. They weren't really typos, but wrong words in places they shouldn't be. This story could be really amazing if you just cleared those up. I also really enjoyed how you maintained a timeframe. That's something i have difficulties with. It's really rare that i review stories, but this one was very well done. If you have any others i'll be likely to read them. Well done. next time i review i'll log in :P

-tori

p.s there were so many moments that i just loved, and 90 characters doesn't let me get through even half of them. cheers

Wow, this was great! So many powerful interactions and new ideas. The interactions between Jasper and Carlisle were perfect for their characters and backgrounds. I love how Jasper brought aspects of vampire nature into the family, as well as learning to be part of the family. I also enjoyed the relationship between Rosalie and Jasper. You read often of the tension between Rosalie and Edward, but the idea that Rosalie and Jasper would be close is intriguing.

In answer to your A/N, I'd be delighted to read this from Jasper's POV. I suspect I'd enjoy reading just about any Twilight fan fiction you choose to write.

Very nice! I like the way we see Carlisle's perspective on Jasper and how there relationship was built over time.

This was a ride! And I absolutely loved it. :) It just felt right, you know. :) The characters were written wonderfully, the story was brilliant. I can quite imagine this is how it happened. This took place in the 50s right? I mean Alice and Jazz joined them in 1950. Well done, amazing job. :)

This is by far one of the best fanfics ive read( and trust me i ready way to many) I loved it and I would love to hear Jaspers side. The way you portrayed Carlisle is how I always felt he would be if her were real. You should try posting this on twilighted or another twilight fan fic website. Sometimes on this website there are so many added each day thet get pushed far back. I think you would really be suprised how much more it will get read. Anyway excellent job your a terrfic writer.

Way awesome story! Very interesting perspective on Jasper's entrance into the cullen family! Great job!

Hey, that was absolutely great! I saw 18K words and thought I'd just read the first part, but then I couldn't stop. Your writing is superb. Next time it might be a little easier to handle in shorter chapters, but it was very good material.

I LOVED it and i loved how long and detailed it was. It was awesome!

Lovely, but very long. You should've broken it up into chapters. I loved it, though.

xoxo,

Lizzy