I loved your story - I stayed up late to finish reading it - it's now 2 am! I liked how you showed the weaknesses in Fritz's character, I think on the show they tend to show him a little too perfect and long suffering, putting up with everything Brenda does whereas he must be more bothered by the things she does (or doesn't get around to doing) than he shows.

I also liked how you had Brenda express her upset rather than pretending nothing was wrong to keep Fritz happy - as you suggest she would have done in the past with previous boyfriends.

I hope you are planning on writing more as I really enjoyed your writing.

Wow. Great job. I just finished reading both of your fics and they are incredibly well written. Heartbreaking at some points, and they made me very angry with Fritz, but absolutely well done!

I loved this story!! You did such a good job with it, you really did the characters of Fritz and Brenda justice.
I really liked the flashbacks that went to previous parts of Brenda's life that also showed real character.
Keep up with the good work, I hope to read more stories from you in the future.

thank you so much for sharing your work, this was so well written. Felt like I was watching an episode, loved all the background info on Brenda. again really enjoyed it, can't wait for the next story.

WHOA!! Talk about Brenda pulling the gun on Pope! I was so not expecting that! This is awesome! Really, really awesome!!