 alc219 2009-11-21 . chapter 17Hi! I read this fic over on twilighted and I was hoping that maybe you had continued it over here but that doesn't seem to be the case. I really hope all is well and you intend to continue this story b/c it is one of my favorites!! xx |
 candelifera 2009-11-13 . chapter 17i really hope that theres not going to be a love triangle between edward bella and jacob. and i don't think bella and jacob becoming friends is a good idea either! love the story so far! update soon! |
 x0potterfanatic0x55 2009-11-08 . chapter 17This is my favorite fanfic. I've read it at least three times. I really hope that you finish this story because I would be very disappointed if you didn't. Thanks!!
xoxo |
 Timmer 2009-11-08 . chapter 17Just finished reading your awesome story ! Loved the kiss in this chapter and love the whole western concept!Looking forward to more! |
 pamelawright 2009-11-07 . chapter 1Okay, so just when you think you cannot find anymore original ideas with the Twilight universe, here ya go.
This feels entirely fresh and natural, and I love how innocent and fuzzy fresh the romance is between E and B.
So, hey. You promised that you would finish this story and I am holding you to it! You haven't updated since July and that was awhile ago. Ahem. Get crackin! |
 rameau 2009-10-31 . chapter 17I don't know why, but this chapter reminded me of Calamity Jane (1953). It's silly, but I miss those even the most ridiculous old westerns and the sense of losing myself in another world for a while. That's what reading this story has been like. As much as I've enjoyed watching Bella bring Edward out of his shell, I can't help but wish I'd see even more. I want to know the details of lives of each and every member of the Cullen family and I can only hope that once you find the time to write again, you'll consider adding to this world you've created.
And yes, the kiss was everything I hoped it would be. |
 rameau 2009-10-31 . chapter 15Fluff hasn't killed me so far. Actually this chapter reminded me of Dr Quinn, Medicine Woman and Andrew courting Colleen. It was incredibly sweet and took ages but at least we got a pay off before the show ended. Now, this story better continue... once real life permits. |
 sydvalentine 2009-10-30 . chapter 17Just finished reading this story, and I absolutely LOVE it. Thanks! |
 rameau 2009-10-30 . chapter 2I loved the way you introduced the families and most of the characters. It's like painting a picture with few deliberate brush strokes and then adding some depth and shadowing to the characters with smaller lines.
It's an interesting start for a story but I noticed that you haven't updated for a while. I wonder do I dare to read on only to find out that you won't be continuing writing it. |
 lilquackers77 2009-10-24 . chapter 17I love your story. It's been a long time since a new chapter was put out. I hope you cont this story or give us a ending, it really is a great story. Edward and all the other characters have real detail and depth to them. |
 Brain in the Gutter 2009-10-19 . chapter 17aww... this was sweet! So... does James end up really being the one to kill Seth, and he covered it up in the scuffle? Cause yeah.. I could see that happening... |
 Brain in the Gutter 2009-10-19 . chapter 15I love fluff! Especially marshmallow fluff... that stuff is good... Not as good as your fluff though... :D Keep up the good work! Love this story! |
 Brain in the Gutter 2009-10-19 . chapter 11'I'll be your huckleberry' - that's from Tombstone! Gah, you killed me with that. Tombstone is my fav western! :D This story rocks! |
 Kambria Rain 2009-10-16 . chapter 17Wow. I just started reading a story for the plot and not lemons, and I wasn't disappointed. Pat yourself on the back woman. Thanks for writing this. It's a fun, interesting read, and I hope you get the inspiration to write more soon. |
 twilightdreamer95 2009-10-11 . chapter 17omg i love this story!!
i wasnt sure id like the western genre but this story is just so great!
keep writing and please update soon!! |