I bet Raziel rocks at poker.

I've been aching for a bit of character development. It's been forever since I've played the games, but still remember enough that the broad-brush approach to those details isn't bad.

What's annoying is that the tea-party reminds me of Wonderland, yet they are mostly blank slates. Such as you can have a vampire or a werewolf or a king and in each story and still have each be a vastly different character with very different goals.

Even Vorador is enough of a mystery that he can stand some development into a well-rounded character.

I think Sues are the only major characters that are improved by leaving them amorphus, and probably because a reader could then avatar into them instead of being jealous.

Nice.

Despite the outof nosgoths norm if not outrageous characters, I find myself enjoying this.

If anything this is quite interesting! I didn't know Kain liked tennis! And we don't see enough of Vorador so i'm glad he's here.

OMG! I hope Sethy is not who I think he is... lol
but I guess he is at least heavily inspired, since he has crimson eyes and doggy ears.

Very nice chapter.
Keep going!

Tarja

Chevalier is the best.
I loved him annoying Kain and being so kitty-cat cute.
And Henrietta threatening Raziel is so awfully funny. I wonder if they will ever pass the threats stage and come to the real thing...

Keep on going!

Tarja

Hello! I haven't been on the guild a lot, but I'm ScrabDemon from Nosgothic Realm. I just wanted to stop by and drop off a few Uber Kudos.
This is one of the better exapmles of well placed original characters I've seen! I especially like the way that they don't mess around with tedious introductions, and let thier actions speak for themselves. They each have thier own unique depth that baisically says "no explanation nessecary", and it shows.
I really love Chevalier! *Holds up a 'Catman Rules' flag* I like how he can have a totally random personality without being hyperactive, and constantly maintains that cool, mishcievious, self-assured attitude. Can we expect more odd shenanigans from him? I'd really like to see him messing with the squid, or some other characters that doesn't seem to get easilly confuzzled/annoyed/freaked out.

very interesting this story of yours.
I imagine that havoc is coming to stay... ^_^
Very interesting OCs by the way.

Waiting impatiently to read more


Tarja