great fic! pllzz update!

so good so good

You've got a good thing going here. I know you can finish it! Besides... you said after a few chapters of you Cowboy Bebop one you'd write more... well you finished Cowboy Bebop... now finish this one! _ Just giving you a hard time.

Good you're on a roll _

Why would Allen be there? He's a knight of another kingdom isn't he? I guess I'll find out next part, ne?

'Helluva' do I sence a little of Mr. T in Dorian _ Okay... I think you ended this a bit too soon. I think maybe you could have went into detail about why he blanked out, or maybe he felt something strange when he held her or was sucked into something... Um.. It felt a little rushed with Dorian there too... Why did he fly? I'm guessing because he just wanted to rush to see her but I think if you made it more... dramatic... like she was beamed to a dangerous place. Anyway!

Hmm... It seemed a bit predictable... I've seen a lot of Esca fics that do that... And I think her going there happened too fast. I know it was the second part and you wanted the action to start but I think the teleportation was a little weak. But other wise again very smooth _ Very deep too, you made me wanna cry!

I finally got your name again and I've finally, after waiting a whole year, started to read it. Very good start, very fluent. You really tugged at my heart in the begining when you reiterated the last episode. I still can't watch it with out it making me cry...

That was really good. I think that maybe you should add a little bit of tension between them like van says something and hitomi pusses him in a lake.

this is one of the better escaflowne fanfics i've read in a while. could you send me an email the next time you update 'coming home'? my email adress is . thanks.

Wonderful! I can't wait to see Van and Hitomi get together. Hmm..do I sense a romance between Endymion and Merle? CUTE!

AHHHHHHHH! *runs around the room* AHHHHHHHHH! NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER! Van had better talk to Hitomi majorly! AH! I'm going to kill myself if you don't upload soon! GREAT FICCY! GO MERLE! VAN'S CUTE! Allen's smart? HITOMI is what!

*bounces up and down in her chair as if she's living on nothing but coffee and chocolate* Hurry with the next chapter! I'm loving this! O_O

PLEASE put the next part up soon. I am dying for it. I totally loved your story. . It is soooo good. I can not wait for your next chapter. PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE upload it soon. Till the next update, TTFN!

your pretty good at writing fics aren't you better than I could every be (I envy your talent). anyway good fic I'll continue to read.