|Reviews for Stay Just a Little Longer|
| Jade-17th 6/16/09 . chapter 4
Very good story! This one and the other one! I cried, I'm such a baby! Keep writing! I would love to read more stories from you!
| keepingupwiththekids 6/6/09 . chapter 1
| Starrynytex 5/18/09 . chapter 4
Great great lemon! I love this outtake!
Then again...I love Edward and Bella lemons so..
But it was definitely written well!
| Lisalove83 5/12/09 . chapter 4
I quite liked this outtake, maybe because I love smutty ExB...yeah, that's probably it. Hahahaha, keep it up!
| melferd 5/8/09 . chapter 4
Um..Guh. *shakes head** These kids need to work things out and stay together.
| shesuchacharmer 4/29/09 . chapter 4
I'm jealous! I want to be Bella! lol
| Homebody 4/25/09 . chapter 4
I read Stay and came to these outtakes through the link on your profile. I'm not disappointed! I very much enjoy your writing style. The way you incorporate humor into the story makes it so much better. And you're right about being visually descriptive. Putting the vision in a reader's mind is a skill so may lack. Anyway, looking foraward to more of whatever you write!
| halfadash 3/16/09 . chapter 4
this chapter so belongs in the main story...i loved it.
| Aurabee 3/16/09 . chapter 4
| mad4hugh 3/16/09 . chapter 4
Well, that was just f**king wonderful! You sure this is your first fanfic? You've definitely got a talent for writing erotic sex scenes!
Seems inadequate to say: thank you!
| Naomitron 3/16/09 . chapter 4
I really enjoyed this alternate ending! In all honesty, I think either of these (including the one you chose) would have worked for closing off the chapter. You did a wonderful job with them both.
| WhisperedHopes 3/16/09 . chapter 4
Beautiful, thanks for sharing the outtakes :)
| vampskies 3/16/09 . chapter 4
Yikes, hot hot hotness. I love when characters that are so in love with each other have passionate sex! :)
| evenstar710 3/15/09 . chapter 4
And thank you for all the nice Edward dreams I am sure to have tonight.
| houselove 3/10/09 . chapter 3
love the outtakes... love the story... cant wait till you update both!