Very well written. It feels as if you've given us a small peek of the Undertaker's mind. Good job on this!

You're a really good writer! Make more stories; I'll read them!

This was beautifully written! I love your metaphor comparing life to a play n_n
yay undertaker

Lol, that was awesome. Especially the last sentence. Kudos!

Oh how poetically beautiful ^^ I love it love it love it! Seriously, you have a most delicious way of writing and this is one of my favourite pieces from you!

Oh, I love your wording. Nicely done- this is so good. ^^

THIS WAS WICKEDLY DONE! I LOVE HIM SO MUCH!

I too asked my self, well why did he become the undertaker if, he stopped surrounding himself from the dead, LOVELY JOB!

Cute! Very Undertaker. I love him so much. And he really is so...so...intriguing? He loves his job, he loves making people uncomfortable, and he loves death. That's all there is to it! Great job!