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Alex Demonica
2009-09-16 . chapter 2
No! You have to right another chapter!! TwT That was like the perfect cliffhanger!
BrazillianHotti9
2009-08-18 . chapter 2
come on! PLease make a sequel to this one it would be soo COOL!
SodaPop1333
2009-08-13 . chapter 2
Hi!:)

Oh. My. GAWD! That was AWSOME! You so totally CAN NOT stop the story there! It's immoral! Please for he sake af all things DAISY continue!

Chow! SodaPop13 33 :)
Liza
2009-07-29 . chapter 2
Hey, I love the story, but please add another section that both win, would make it amazing! :)
iloverandyortonwwefan23
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
5 stars 8D
Sinistera of the Akatsuki
2009-07-11 . chapter 2
please make another chapter
MiSzJOEJONAS21
2009-07-07 . chapter 2
awesome lol xD
funkymunky2511
2009-07-03 . chapter 2
i totally loved this story and your right derek always wins lol
Cathy
2009-06-29 . chapter 2
OMG! U can't leave us hanging there...it's so good! Please tell us what happens after
Sarah~Sapphire
2009-06-24 . chapter 2
OMG!, You Are Such A Talented Writer! I Love The Tension You Put Into It. You DEFINATELY Need To Keep This Story Going! I Just Wished You'd Update Sooner. The Suspense Kills lol...

Great Work!
Sarah
HeArTxbRoKeNxCB Lover xD
2009-06-14 . chapter 2
I liked it! YOu didn't make a Lemon, which was fine but instead you made it a payback, revenge kind of thing. Although, not that I care what happens to Amber?
evanescenceangel18
2009-06-10 . chapter 2
Wow this story was incrediable. I totally loved it but I feel so bad for both Casey and Derek because they were both left hanging out to dry. This story is amazing I am at a loss for words. Love ya forever and ever. XD
mimibear
2009-06-08 . chapter 2
nice comeback of Derek..but i hope there's more of this like Casey would get back at Derek at something unexpected...please..ohwell...UPDATE!! O.o
Lilah
2009-06-03 . chapter 2
I thought it was really good actually. It was funny too. You could do a third chapter where they get together for real...
DASEY♥
2009-06-03 . chapter 2
I was reading the comments and one said "Were They Could Both Give In" that would be the best chapter ever! I love the relationship they share
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