This was definitely my favorite chapter, with Dojima running from the hellhounds. It was amazing!!

This chapter was awesome and I don't think it was too early for them to have sex, compared to other fan fics that are solely for them having sex and nothing else. You did an amazing job and I seriously hope you do more with Yosuke and Souji!

I honestly think, out all of the fanfics I have read, that yours is the best I have read so far, just from the first chapter. I love how you describe his pain and how you don't go into the yaoi straight away. I seriously had tears in my eyes at this one. I believe you deserve a 5/5 my friend. Congrats!

Very VERY good hope to see more -giggles- When you write remember "Don't think, Feel!"

Now things are getting interesting!

And don't worry! I'm not really impatient, so take your time! (Just don't update for a year like I did!)

When I saw the alert in my inbox today I was like, "YEAH MORE AWESOME-NESS"

I was surprised when you sort of hinted at Kanji/Akihiko, though not negatively. This chapter is wonderful as always, and the slight suspense near the end suited the chapter nicely or something, I don't really know how to phrase it ahaha...

Good luck with college and that webcomic you mentioned! I shall wait (patiently) for the next chapter!

YOU BETTER CONTINUE THIS KUSDFGHZSKJDFH IF YOU DON'T I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND THREATEN YOU WITH UNICORNS WIELDING SPUD-GUNS.

Seriously, this plot is brilliant and unique and the way you develop the characters is amazing. I hope to see the next chapter up soon.

SON.

This story is so friggin awesome. I dunno how to describe it it’s just... like a perfect idea for another Persona game or something like that, because everything makes perfect sense and you even used the characters of P3! Its ... too good to be true *__* I’m really impressed by your writing-skills. It’s like you’re a professional or something like that! Well, I would like to play a game like that *laughs* especially with all the fanservice hehe... >//> A real good story and Yosuke x Souji... what do you need more?
Good job, seriously! Keep it up! X3

I really love this Story! Your ideas are great, i love them!! I hope you'll continue soon!^^

Wow...this story is...surprisingly deep, actually. Haha. I'd say this is the best Persona 4/Persona 3 crossover fic I've ever read. Hell, maybe even the best P4 fic I've ever read. Please keep writinbg!

Great work so far. I love me some angst. :) But be careful about the dialog sounding the same as the narration. I mean there are words and sentence structures a high school kid isn't going to use when talking to a close friend. Like the line "... I caught snatches of rushed conversation." It makes for great narrative but it sounds unnatural and awkward when said aloud, and few would really explain it that way to someone they're comfortable with no matter how articulate they are. Everything else is great so far, but it's just the unnatural lines work like speed bumps when I'm trying to immerse myself in the characters and story.

Wow!! I love this story. A very different take on the continuation of the game. And you are includeng number 3 too!! Awesome!

By the way, I think Susano-o is the brother of the japanese gods Tsukiyomi and Amaterasu, the moon and the sun godesses. He's supposed to be the god of storms or something like that.

Wow! Things are heating up!

I take it you read Glass Sugar's story-since you had the part about Souji turning into Izanagi instead of summoning.

Also, I hate to act like a know-it-all, but Susano-o is Japanese-not Celtic.

Celtic? What? How could Dojima not know one of his country's own gods? Granted he could just not care about myths, but the mere fact he knows the word Celtic...
I can understand Yosuke not knowing. Silly teenager.

And ouch, I hope they find less painful ways to summon/transform. Someone should probably mention the fact that Souji, after shooting his hand doesn't have the bullet wound anymore, which is a little comforting.

I can't wait for the update! It's getting exciting!