That was a really cute story. I have to admit that my naughty mind was going in a totally different direction.

That's so cute! They're in character too, and it's funny. Ororo manages to not crack up laughing how does she do it?! Don't mess with Mother Nature fools.

This is adorable. I love it!

too cute! heh

LOL! I loved it. The humor between the characters was excellent. It seemed to get just a little muddy when Wolverine went upstairs, but otherwise, a great piece of work.

It's been a long time since I've read any X-Men fan fiction and you weren't writing when I stopped so it's good to see you writing again. Good story.

Skyz

I enjoyed this. It's fun & cute & very nostalgic.

I read a lot of your short stories over the weekend but wouldn't let me leave a review so I ended up checking out the rolo realm you recommended. I wanted to tell you how much I liked this story & thanks you for the recommendation.

You got a few mistakes but good story with some light fun but why does it seem Kurt & Peter are out to get Logan?