This does go well with Schon. It was great to see Serenity's thoughts. And going though that would make anyone lose innocence.

I love this one exactly the way it is!

Great work on this one!

Wow great work on this one - awesome job.

This is amazing, in a really really really really really REALLY dark sense.

This all sounds painful with Serenity and it ties with Schon really well.

You certainbly are the master of this couple!

Wow - I loved this drabble, not just for its lyrical words buit for its ability to express Serenity's fate as clearly as you did.

Wow - this was really dark and it alludes to Schön quite well.

How very tragic and it corresponds with the story quite well.

Interesting, but sad.

TDH

I loved reading this story.. Poor Serenity, because of Marik she's doomed to walk in darkness forever, never seeing those that she loved alive.. Great Story..