Not bad. Could use a little touchup.

I noticed a review you placed in P-Faith's "Red and White" story...is it true? I feel sorry for you. But all the same, it means that you are a lovely lady and hate to be set back in life.

Rating: 9/10!

Now that I think about it, I could appreciate a little online company. Someone to talk to, I guess...

You wrote this ages ago, but I love it! I can really relate to the relationships here, you've expressed them so beautifully. Hope you write more, how bout something on MX?

This is really good. I want more! Continue! Please! This is really interesting,I like how you're giving Eries so much personality she didn't really have much in the anime, but your Eries is really cool :) keep it up!

y don't u continue already? f/e, m/a, v/h is a great trio couple! great beginning!

Wow, Eries stories have sure gotten popular over these two years. This is really good, very nice. Update! For the love of God, UPDATE!

I hope you continue. Eries is a very cool princess to say the least and I can't wait till the next chapter. Hope Folken is in it... Just kidding, keep it up! :)

Lili, you said Folken was in the story too... que paso? Anyways, it seems really good so far, you're such a good writer, this is to anyone who reads this review, 'My friend, Lili, is such a good writer, but some of her stories is depressing.'

This is only the first chapter, right, cuz it said prologue and I think thats beginning, right?

Well, whatever, when are you going to upload my story! You better read this!

Rock on! Gotta love eries-but where's your 1st eries ff?

oh wow, another Eries fic! do go on, it's a good beginning. very perceptive about Eries' relationship with her sisters.