I love this story! The poem at the end is awesome. The use of metaphor throughout the whole thing is fantastic. I was halfway through your story and I watched an SVU episode and I was honestly kinda' surprised when Olivia wasn't pregnant and Elliot was still with Kathy.

Oh my god...I have no words. I have read this through twice in three weeks. Beautiful. I'm going to gather my thoughts and write a more meaningful in death review. This story's deserves that and so much more.

I'm in awe of your writing and so desperately wished you had more for me to read.

Wow! I as type these few words. tears are flowing and I hate you for writing such fabulous story that I had to cry.

First off. Congratulations on this story. Reading it,I thought wow. this is good. It capture so much of each character inner angst that so reminiscent of the show, that I can see this happen. I can actually see the struggle both Elliot and Olivia going through as they come to the conclusion that they love each other. Second, Why this story hasn't got more review. This is good. Looking forward to more from you.

wow

i really like this story thank's

Absolutely amazing story, would have reviewed every chapter but got too lost in it, nice to see a story following them right to the end but I prefer being neive and deciding that Elliot and Olivia will stay in their 40s for all eternity. LOL! you're a very talented writer! xox

I absolutely loved this story. I came across it looking for long stories. It is extremely well written. One of the best I have read while on here. Your words are absolutely beautiful.

This story is fantastic. I finished it in two sittings. As soon as I started, I could feel the emotion radiating off of every word. You are a fantastic writer. I found myself laughing out loud at points and on the verge of tears at others. It's amazing. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Wow I've just started on this one and it's very well done! I LOVE this line: 'As he brushes past her she catches his eye, and the look she gets gives her a stinging feeling in her stomach. She'll remember this later tonight as she stares at the ceiling in her bed.' Genius and spot on.

Wow. I finally reached the end of your story. It took me quite some time to read those 50 chapters and now I'm wondering why you don't have 500 reviews, because this is one of the best E/O stories out there. It's into character and real. A small part of me is a teeny weeny bit disappointed that Elliot isn't the father, but I guess that would have lead to a whole bunch of other drama;).

So, thank you very much for sharing this story:).

This fic was beautiful, so real and raw. I loved it and have never read anything like; so thank you for sharing I cannot wait to read more from you.()

perfect. thats really all i can say

I'm lacking the words to describe what yours did to me. You are an awesome writer and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you very much for sharing it!

Wow, wow, wow... what an amazing story. This story touched my heart in so many ways. It was truly inspiring, angst filled, loving, and everything else I can't possibly put in this review... just wow.. I'm typing this review as I just finish the last chapter..I'm a little emotional but that's just coming from brilliant writing. Thanks so much for sharing.