Perfect brotherly love fluff. THanks for the laughs, I needed a happy thought.
"Children seldom misquote you. In fact, they usually repeat word for word what you shouldn't have said" (Unknown). -Raven

hahahaha, oh my god, i can't breath for laughing. that was fantastic! i can just imagine jeff's face when that came out and what must scott have thought? haha, hilrious.

you're so good, write more soon,

blacky xox

Oh I would have loved to see Jeff's face when Alan did that.

Ow, I think I strained something! From the mouths of babes, eh?

I really love your characterisation in this: Alan's petulant attitude at being ignored is so in character, and Virgil's desire for peace and quiet is also believable - who creates masterpieces in chaos?

This was...not a good idea to read this at work. My boss wants to know why I'm giggling like an idiot right now, and the best I can do is a grin and "kids say the darndest things".

Poor Virgil, he's never going to live that one down. Not that what he did was wrong just...the result was priceless.

You know, after this day, their father isn't going to let them go anywhere alone ever again.

An amusing little portrayal of pre-adolescent behaviour. The constant "Look at me!" is so stereotypical of that age group. It's actually rather worrying how easily my son seems to fill out Alan's character.

I wasn't entirely sure about Virgil's character. He just seemed to be...'missing' something. But I know how hard it is to get a good grasp of a character's personality, so I still commend you for your success with Alan. He was perfect - in a very imperfect way, of course. Poor Virgil.

The humor was well balanced, and light-hearted enough to make me chuckle from time to time. Your written style seems very mature and detailed, and I'd love to see you handling some darker material. Perhaps you could try the boys as Thunderbirds?

That was fantastic! There were so many moments that made me laugh out loud. I loved the fact that it was Virgil and Alan - it's a combination that we don't often see in this fandom.
I'm really looking forward to reading more from you.

Great start for your foray into the Thunderbirds world! Man, I can hear and see this happening..Poor Virgil.

You captured the boys so well, I can picture the whole thing in my mind. Alan trying to get his older brother's attention, and Virg wishing he could just have a moment's peace. Throw in the hero worship and it just isn't Virgil's day. Loved the way Alan summed everything up. Had me laughing out loud.

So, does this mean you're going to play with these brothers as well? I certainly hope so!

good

very sweet and funny

liked Virgl and Alan they were written very well and were very much like the chqaracters who that I could picture inside my mind when I watched the movie.

(sorry for any mistakes Engligh is not my first language)

S.L.L.

That was adorable, witty and well written. I thoroughy enjoyed reading it. Well done! Don't you just love the innocence of children?!

Oh, Scott turned up! I really wanted Virgil to be able to get them out of that himself! It's not a mistake on your part, though; it reads much better with Virgil slightly frustrated, and anyway, Scott and the guys so WOULD turn up right then. Poor Virgil didn't even get to finish John's drawing!

That was enjoyable - thanks for that.

This was just fun, sweet, and a great mix of the brothers. Especially loved the ending paragraph.:)

That story totally made my day! And it's been a really long day...
Thank you for posting it!

I absolutely loved this! Just hysterical and so believable in the brother interaction.

Hee. Hee. I have to say, I laughed hard enough it caused a coughing fit! :D

Thank you for the pick-me-up.

Awesome.

HAHAHAHA! OMG! Oh God, I can't stop laughing! Oh, my sides hurt now. -takes a breath- Oh, this was just priceless.