LOVE IT LOVE LOVE IT! this was so awesome!
-M.O.

It's something Italian, right? To do with art?... Messy... art...
Ah, I'm probably wrong.

Anyway.

WOW. That story was utterly amazing. I don't think anything else I've read could compare.
Perfection (or as near as ever possible), caught in pixels on a page.

Lovely! In character, tantalizingly out of reach, and so hopeless you can't even cry, in retrospect. And truly, the only thing keeping me from completely going over is the simple, unchangeable fact that sad endings depress me so much I'm frowning the rest of the day, and no amount of reading happy endings can get rid of that feeling..it just stays.


So would you please be interested in another Draco Malfoy/Luna Lovegood? with a happy ending?

Really nice. I like this a lot. You inspired something beautiful with this too, so yeah. REALLY NICE.

Brutism is something to do with music that causes someone to do something. Or something like that, I think, anyway. I forget the exact meaning, so correct me if I am wrong. But I think this fits the story, even if my meaning is wrong. Draco is controlled by others, their music - and eventually - he acts based upon this instead of his own feelings towards Luna. Typical Malfoy fashion, very in character. I liked this a lot, it brightened my day a bit. Not many people can pull this pairing off with Malfoy in character.

oh my god. this was amazing! there were butterflies in me while i read and i could almost feel draco's impending devastation when she walked away. you're an amazing author! more please!

Oh my god, this is - brilliant. It's poetic and beautiful and sad, but so so so SO good. Luna's character - the way you played with words and thoughts and her relationship with Malfoy... It was very realistic and enthrancing, I couldn't stop reading and wondering about how this was going to end. It's painful to know that it did end and not happily, but I guess there wasn't really an option. The scene in the Great Hall, when Draco doesn't stand up for Luna - it was a nice way to break them apart, because that really sounds like something that Draco would do. I know I'm lacking eloquence, but I just... I guess I can't really put into words just how much I liked this. I'd have to quote many parts of the story. But just so you know, this is the first Draco/Luna fic I've ever read, and I'm glad it was this one, because I think this is really wonderful and I'll look for more now. I also hope to see more coming from you. <3

the ending is quite sad. though this is one of the most interesting and beautiful stories i have ever read. your writing style is quite something. I hope one day you will right a book about those six breaths between the boys words and girls. Amazing! I so wish that I could read an original story from you. Though this is one of the most original fics ever. I just hope it could have ended otherwise. Thank you.

Didn't cath the metaphors but loved it anyways...

Oh.

That was so incredibly beautiful.

I have no idea where the title is from. Now I don't want to look it up, either.

But..wow.

I have the strongest desire to shake your hand warmly to congratulate you in your -searches for modern word- AMAZINGNESS ... how corny, that word. I should have chosen another one. Tsk tsk.

How about 'brilliant'? Would that tickle your fancy? Whichever floats your boat. Honestly ... I'm without words.

I bow to you in honor of your greatness. You are the meaning of excellence when looking up the word not author but writer. Imagine.

And then there is me. Plain and quiet and shy and boring and lame me. I must admit that I envy your talent and wish to be -cough- just like you in the future.

Bruitism - I haven't a single clue from the tips of a single hair on my stubborn head. But then you mentioned 'writing you a story.' I have tried - and failed for that matter - to figure out the meaning of bruitism. I am weak, and at last I enter the search engine, yet I find nothing but your fic.

However, I am indeed interested if you write a story for me. I am desperate, but I will never beg you to unend, nor will I force you.

Writer of high-skill, please write on [:

That was beautiful. Like God of Small Things but easier to understand. I'm really gutted that i don't know the origins of the title but i will look it up after...
Thankyou
xox

Crazy good. I loved it, of course. ~smiles~ I'm back, by the way, as though this note wasn't proof of that.

Brutism is having the characteristics of a brute, I think, just extrapolating from what it sounds like.

Boot camp nearly killed me T.T but I'm free now.

That's beautiful.

Gaah, I'm in love.

~Kat

CRYING CRYING. why so sad? why cant there be a happy ending? of course, i know this way the story is better but still! i love it!