SO SAD. You are an excellent writer.

very good story

Wow.

This was excellent.

You had me in tears (

I love it!

Great writing!

Thank you so much.

I love this. I wish more people wrote stories like this one.

Yeah, I know Edward can't technically commit suicide; I meant go to the Volturi by that, because he's practically committing suicide if he provokes them. Yeah.

I understand your train of thought. Yup. Okay. Shutting up now.

I like it! You've got the characters and their emotions down perfectly, and I think Charlie should've tried to kill Edward. And then Edward can go commit suicide or something.

... Er, yeah. Nice job.

OMG*emotional breakdown* NO

more more more! i wana know how edward feels, and jacob, and i was here seth speak more.. thankz!

uhm lets see... i like the 2nd one

This might be one of my favorite stories ever... (The only competition being your very own Brown-Eyed Girl) This is so sad that I almost cried. I loved it! My favorite lines:

“What are you doing here?” Jacob snapped, startling me.

“Finishing what I started,” I whispered.

AND

"They say that death is the moment that your heart stops beating, but it’s really not. It’s the moment that the person that means the most to you is gone. That’s when you truly have nothing." That is utter genius. It's so brilliant and IT WAS WRITTEN BY A 15-YEAR-OLD? Geez, you have talent.

AND

"Some people say that life goes on. But it really doesn’t. I have seen life stop, just come to an end, completely. And it is not pretty. It is not blissful. It is not heaven."

That's so poetic...

Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

AH! NO BELLA DIED! EDWARD AND JACOB ARE UNHAPPY! NEVER! (wait, that means that they're single... hm my chance!) LOVE THIS

CONTINUE

UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE

aw it mad me cry...it was so good.

HA, SUCK ON THAT, EDWARD CULLEN.

pretentious git. thinking he can waltz back into bella's life after he ruined it, and being so rude to jacob.

and yay, bella's dead. sorry, i never liked her.

this is written very well though. in-character. perfect. :]

aw wat happend to her.