you... suck... **... :(

VYNTRESSER GET UP RIGHT NOW AND FINISH YOUR STORY.IF YOU NEED INSPIRATION THEN GET YOUR LAZY SELF UP AND WATCH A COUPLE OF AVATAR EPISODES OR READ SOME BOOKS! ARG! I CANT STAND IT ANY MORE,IM IN THE VERGE OF TEARS, YOU JUST HAVE TO FINISH YOUR STORY! 8( PLEAS MOVE IT!

moo! :(

moo! :(

um... are ya gonna continue? :(

What is going on! Why are you not writing your awsome story? Are you ok? Come on, please, please, PLEASE, finish writing the story! I'm going to die of antisapation!=)

Hi! I love your stories, you are such a great writer.I'm so sad that Avatar ended, it was the best cartoon ever,im so mad that they did that, there was alot of other things they could have done with Avatar but still your wonderful story is keeping me alive..teehee..anyway thanks for writing this story, you are the best :) dont stop writing!

r ya'll goin to continyas or watt?

Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE, update really SOON! it's killing me... (love your stories by the way)

PLEASE UPDATE!

I just spent the last few days reading this series from beginning to end, and I have to say... I love it! It's really good. I have noticed a couple of issues that I want to point out, though:
You had a tendency to slip into the same phrases for things a lot. For example, one that showed up a lot was it being said that something "basically" did something. Occasionally I felt that the 'basically' was unnecessary.
Another small error is that you slip between tenses sometimes; from present to past, usually. This is a common flaw, however, so you needn't feel overly bad about that. :) Still, it would be good to work on it.
Like I said, though, I love this series so far. It's fascinating and I just love the concept.
Finally, the big question: ...Are you ever going to update?! :D

omg! i loved your last 2 stories! Like idk, your stories have this excitment that some of the others dont have. PLEASE UPDATE! SON!

OMG!! YOU'RE BACK! YAY!!

By the way, this is BeautyLiesInTheHeart from dA! :D

I loved this so far!! I miss the updates! :(

UPDATE ASAP!!

-EdwardXBella4eva

Very good all the things that make a good writer.I read all your stories for this and I'm impressed.

WHO! NEW BOOK! WHO! NEW CHAPTERS! Welcome back! Good to see your still writting.-in dark deadly voice- Now keep writting if you want to live. -happy cherry voice- bye.