This is awesome right off the back. 7 chapters in and you have my utterly hook. I'm ** off that you don't have any more reviews than 5. What is wrong with the readers these days? You review good stories and encourage the author to write! So that's what I'm going to do. Be reviewing all your chapters from here and out and reading them intensely. Wonderful characterization (You write Jackson and Lisa so well), plotlines are magnificent and amazing. I've been finding your series since forever and I'm glad you produced this. This cliffhanger in this chapter was a killer though, lol. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

This is getting good! I always enjoy your writing. I'm surprised you don't get more reviews. Your narrative is extremely dynamic, and you have excellent grammar and storylines. Well done, awaiting more!

Thank you so much for reposting this story. I love this one, it may be my favorite out of your original trilogy.

This is definitely interesting. I think I need to follow up on your previous stories on Jack's past to catch up. This story is one that I will follow. Look forward to more.

I think your writing is absolutely brilliant. I am so excited for this.

Okay, I was a little confused at first (I just got into the Red Eye fanfiction fandom in the last month), but I didn't know that this was supposed to be your intended sequel to 'Bejerot's Diagnosis' (I also read your stories out of order, eek!). I'm liking the history/background of the World Society (love how you include actual historical events). I'm wondering if you are going to include tidbits of information from 'Toccata and Fugue' in this fic.

You went straight to the conflict and I love how Agatha Bayley was "chosen."

I'm all excited now...