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spoiledpuppy
A perv to the end!
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LOL! xD but seriously, super awesomeness! Write more smut Elf-sama! *_*
This was super amazing! Best M-rated fic I've read in awhile (and trust me I read lots of M-rated fics! xD)

>/< Omg I love it! XD

Ari chan

Nicely done. I actually got chills! =D

Wow, your such an amazing writer. I hope get to be as half as good as you.

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...awesome!...

this was truly beautiful.
Usually, when people write lemons...i'm cheering them on saying, "oh how I love this couple! blah blah blah."
But this, left me utterly...speechless.
It is truly a beautiful piece of work.
You captured the intensity of there love, and it is truly beautiful :]
<3
Thank you for writing such a beautiful one-shot (hopefully more to come?) ;]

-somebodyxnobody

My Goodness...are u sure this is ur first M rated becuz that was so detailed and had so much good stuff (that's all i can say with out going overbord). I have nothing bad to say except that when Yumemi reached her climax it was a little confusing I had to read it twice to fully understand it but after that the whole story was amazing!Keep it up!! ^_^

I've been waiting for an M rated fic in this section. Good job! Now if you'll excuse me, I need to dunk my head in cold water.
Later.

this was utterly amazing
I'm not exaggerating when I say it brought me to tears
Please write more, you have such a talent :)

are you kidding?! this is awsome! i really like how intense it is :)

Passionate, intense and very very sweet! xD It's such a good piece. I'm loving the way you conveyed the characters in such a situation. Obstinate Yumemi is too awesome~

Is it too much to expect more M-rated fics from you in the future? 8DD Teehee~

Please, hand me the tissues, I'm having a nosebleed here.

This was a very satisfying piece, being able to make me fangirl without using the crude descriptions followed my most M rated stories.

And don't worry about the "plot". xD I thought it was adorable. (Is that even the right word?)

Please keep writing, you've satisfied my fangirl needs~ -bows-

g-gughh...
that was...ah...I cannot find any words whatsoever to express... best M fic yet for this archive. I'm melting into a pile of goo here...sorry I can't give a decent review...

Ah! Amazing! I loved it! Seriously you kept them in character so well! I bow down to your greatness!

... *has melted into a pile of happy fan-girl goop* Gah, so good...

Everything about this was just wonderful. The images that you created with words were beyond amazing and the smut... Oh, the smut.