Good Stuff mate! I would say take it a little further between Delia and Turkish.

Haha, this is fantastic! I can really imagine that happening to Turkish, bless him. I love how you portray Errol as the annoying git we all know he is, particularly when both Brick Top and his daughter tell him to shut up.

This was very well written, not too much detail that it brings the reader's attention away from the story but enough detail to bring a vivid image of the scene into the reader's mind!

hey...wow...similar to my fic a bit..lol but ya cool dialogue

Delia is pretty cool. I think she has the minerals.

Oh, if you like Guy Richie fics, I just started a Lock, Stock story. It would be great if you can read it and let me know what you think. If you don't read it that's fine, if you do that's awesome.

Thanks.

i love this! im thinking that you should make it into a story or make another story like it. D

hey, good one! didn't know you're writing for snatch too. take care ... The owl -