Hehe fun

You mastered the way of creating "intelligent" conversations. I mean, they both know WHAT they want, yet they won't say straight WHAT they want, but they will be dancing around THAT they want and talk and jest and smirk (and waste time which could be spent more actively, readers might say^^). Those conversations are wonderful!^^ And tell much about the characters. A shy one, or uncertain of his?her feelings would not act like that.

Beautiful story. No worries this time, only sweet consummating^^ MORE-OF-THAT! People, let's chant^^

I loved this! Legolas made me giggle. You write beautifully. I don't think there is really a plethora of fan fiction writers who can use Elvish without sounding tacky. Well done! x

Legolas is so sneaky.

lmfao.

loved it! xD

I love love love it.

Big smiles from me the whole time as I read this, although I was a little nervous about the exchange where they said they weren't lovers anymore. Way to keep us guessing! No, very cute, and I enjoyed it.

Very good. I thought it was kinda funny when Aragorn saw that Legolas had the vial of oil and he said, "I was looking for that!" I don't know why, but that was funny! LOL!

Nice ñ.ñ

Kisses from Argentina.

that was awesome!

Very well done, fantastic in fact!
I just love how you just have this sneaking suspicion from the very beginning that Legolas has the oil, evil elf that he is!
Have I mentioned how well the dialect flows with your writing?
Very well, stunningly, as natural as thought or drawing breath.
I was a TEENSY bit confused by how Legolas speaks before Aragon mentioned that he was awake, but when I read it for the third time it made sense (and by "it" I am referring to the entire story, this is like the eight time I've read it and I just realized I didn't review).
Love your writing. Never stop!

Marius.

Didn't log in so I hope this works. Just wanted to tell you that the contents of this story wasn't certainly NOT 'misplaced'. Everything was where it should be to create a delightful brief romantic episode for our tired king and his enticing spouse. :-)

Woww, Legolas just amazes me. He always thinks ahead of time, doesnt he? And you know what is creepy? Im in a library right now..and right in front of me behind the computers on the wall are some posters with famous people holding books and promoting reading..and ORLANDO BLOOM is one of them..and hes Legolas in the film..and Im reading LOTR..O_o I know, Im pyscho.

He looks pretty weird in the picture. Not exactly attractive. OKAY WELL MAYBE, SHADDAPSHADDAP..but hes hunched for no reason..FINE hes leaning over a banister..BUT STILL, hes hunched over a banister WEIRDLY AND HENCEFORTH THAT IS NOT ATTRACTIVE, NOBODY CAN MAKE ME!!

Stop stop, no, nobody can recruit me into the ILOVEYOUORLANDO Ship, nope nope! I have dived off that some times ago.

...

..O_O

..IM LYING, I HAVE NEVER DIVED OFF, I HAVE CLUNG ON TO THE DECK LIKE IT WAS MY *LIFE*.

I shall shaddap now. I am revealing all my secrets. DANG YOU, MARSHMALLOW, YOU ARE TOO CLEVER!!

~BGE !!

Do you realise that when I read “I am not your lover.” “Not any longer,” I was just about to despair? I was thinking, 'no please, come on Legolas, seduce him!'.
How glad I was to see that it was unnecessary after all. Great story; I liked the fluff.

PWP! of course! but with a little plot known as marry-age.

of course, someone is still an amazing author. : D

yayyers yayyers. love it. love it. love it. legalos is such a clever little bugger. lawl.