| Reviews for Corrupted Alliance |
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Afriel 3/13/09 . chapter 8Yay, I'm happy! You finally got on with the central plot! So is she Azula's daughter? Nice concept. There is this story by TheDeceiverGod about a lover of Azula, try it, it is really nice:) |
Afriel 3/13/09 . chapter 7This seems like one of those stories where you write just for the sake of developing the characters. Can you please get on with the central plot? I mean, I like the way you write so far, there's great development in the characters (they're grown up, so I suppose they will have different personalities), but please get on with the central plot:) |
seyheystevierey 3/10/09 . chapter 8Good chapter. I really like what you hav edone so far. pms |
jhguy 3/6/09 . chapter 1 good story |
seyheystevierey 3/1/09 . chapter 6I'm not sure where you are headed with this but I plan on enjoying the concept is one I havent seen yet and I like the way you are mixing the drama and humor together.I've noticed that on this site people dont review much and i am surprised by this.I dont review every chapter because I read a lot of stories but know I am out up the good words |
ParasiticAlacrity 2/21/09 . chapter 1If you look at the top right hand corner and the bottom right hand corner, there are arrows. Click them, and you'll be taken to the next chapter. .' |
Tonya 2/21/09 . chapter 1 What happens next? |