 nates1mom 2009-06-11 . chapter 31*sob*
Simply wonderful. The whole thing. I'm dreading reading the other one... |
 nates1mom 2009-06-11 . chapter 29Oh htat was lovely. I love seeing him coming full circle with the water. And probably what I like so much about Ami is that she's identified with the power of that particular element...and you do write her as beautiful and as fluid and transparent as it seems she should be.
Bravo. This is one my favorite chapters. |
 nates1mom 2009-06-10 . chapter 24*sigh* |
 nates1mom 2009-06-10 . chapter 23*snort*
It ain't just thier hearts sayin' it all... |
 nates1mom 2009-06-10 . chapter 22"Flowers are never wasted, though"...indeed.
And how do I love that Kunizte's flower is the daffodil... |
 nates1mom 2009-06-10 . chapter 21I enjoyed the picture of these boys training with The Teacher. Nicely done and now I know their order. Is Kunzite the leader (or whatever he's called) because he is the oldest? Or did it just work out that way? |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 13ah...Kemal's story... |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 12Nephrite is the one I least understand. |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 11Oh. Lovely. |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 10It's heart wrenching to read these parts of the story. Very dark indeed. |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 9*That* was sad. |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 8Popcorn. Appropriate that it's drabblage. |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 7Wink - This chapter gave a good bit of backstory that you gave me. If this were a fully formed fic, it would serve well at the beginning. Kunzite, Jadeite...Kunzite, Jadeite...who do I like the best? |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 6Your use of each prompt is excellent. Clever boy. |
 nates1mom 2009-06-09 . chapter 5Oh htat one is sad. (Fog) Sounds like Beryl truely did a number on Zoisite.
Fog's always been a little bit creepy to me. You captured that nicely. |