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nates1mom
2009-06-11 . chapter 31
*sob*

Simply wonderful. The whole thing. I'm dreading reading the other one...
nates1mom
2009-06-11 . chapter 29
Oh htat was lovely. I love seeing him coming full circle with the water. And probably what I like so much about Ami is that she's identified with the power of that particular element...and you do write her as beautiful and as fluid and transparent as it seems she should be.

Bravo. This is one my favorite chapters.
nates1mom
2009-06-10 . chapter 24
*sigh*
nates1mom
2009-06-10 . chapter 23
*snort*

It ain't just thier hearts sayin' it all...
nates1mom
2009-06-10 . chapter 22
"Flowers are never wasted, though"...indeed.

And how do I love that Kunizte's flower is the daffodil...
nates1mom
2009-06-10 . chapter 21
I enjoyed the picture of these boys training with The Teacher. Nicely done and now I know their order. Is Kunzite the leader (or whatever he's called) because he is the oldest? Or did it just work out that way?
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 13
ah...Kemal's story...
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 12
Nephrite is the one I least understand.
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 11
Oh. Lovely.
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 10
It's heart wrenching to read these parts of the story. Very dark indeed.
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 9
*That* was sad.
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 8
Popcorn. Appropriate that it's drabblage.
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 7
Wink - This chapter gave a good bit of backstory that you gave me. If this were a fully formed fic, it would serve well at the beginning. Kunzite, Jadeite...Kunzite, Jadeite...who do I like the best?
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 6
Your use of each prompt is excellent. Clever boy.
nates1mom
2009-06-09 . chapter 5
Oh htat one is sad. (Fog) Sounds like Beryl truely did a number on Zoisite.

Fog's always been a little bit creepy to me. You captured that nicely.
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