Fail? my friend you did not fail. This was fantastic. Two unlikely people yet they seem to be meant for each other. I might start liking this pairing.

Are you kidding?! This is cute. One of the reasons I like cause its pitxred >/< and also I like the way you set it up for the two. good job :)

AW! SO cute. I absolutely loved it. You probably didn't have to rate it M, though. Write more, cause some people can't write a good, somewhat innocent yaoi.

I missed this when you submitted it—I always forget that they don’t show M fics in the just in section. They really need to change that…anyway, this fic was adorable, especially them faking broken ankles to hide their walking and having to accommodate Pit’s wings—that’s how I would imagine it would have to be. 8D I loved the ending, too. I would imagine that’s how they would express their love to each other, since they’re young and maybe a little unsure. Anyway, great jorb—WRIT MOAR, erm, um, if you feel it…

I loved this so much. If there's a pairing I love as much as Link/Pit, it's Pit/Pokemon Trainer. =33 (I call him Crimson in my fics though XD)

I hope you decide to write more cute and sexy little drabbles like these in the future. I think it was awesome!

And I agree, Pit/PT needs more love (and Razz's fic is amazing). I, too, am contributing to the Pit/PT community after I finish my current story.

Keep writing!

I think the M-rating may be a little too high, but it never hurts to play it safe. ^^; Well, I'm not a fan of this pair, so it's hard to comment on it. I do have to say the complications during their, um... sessions seem rather painful and awkward. ^^; But in any case, it was short, simple, and sweet. X3

PF, FAIL? Oh please. Not even close. I like how, the first time, it was Red; then Pit sought him out afterward. The conversation they have at the end was so nice~and so was the last line too.

You did a good job here, man. (Kinda) smutty drabbles are always the best.

~ASK