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| Reviews for Golden Moon |
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   4MeJasper 4/15/13 . chapter 51And after Alice's confessions of betrayal, Bella still makes the attempt to be friends. Then Emmett arrives - and notices the stench! |
| 4MeJasper 4/15/13 . chapter 50 Laurent died for her, and Mike is being changed. Quite the twists! |
| 4MeJasper 4/15/13 . chapter 3 Intriguing first "reacquaintance" chapter. And she's doing well. |
| Athul 4/11/13 . chapter 17 I have to say , this is really one of the best TS ff's I've ever read. I can believe that such a thing would actually happen in the books. I also prefer this headstrong , capable Bella to Meyer's whiny, dependent Bella. Great Job! Can't wait to continue reading! |
| sbcorn 4/9/13 . chapter 20 You mentioned earlier to review even for new readers...I love to read, not great at reviews. Just wanted to say that I really like the way this story is going. Stephanie |
| Fabrianna 4/8/13 . chapter 21 Great |
| Fabrianna 4/4/13 . chapter 3 Yeah that makes sense that jasper would keep a distance from bella |
| Fabrianna 4/4/13 . chapter 2 Great to know how bella feels |
| Fabrianna 4/4/13 . chapter 1 Yes I do like the stronger bella |
| AnuluvesTwilightSeries 3/18/13 . chapter 54 Finally I finished reading the story I never thought I will finish it as I couldn't take how mean Bella was for not giving jasper chance I mean yeah I understand why she did it but seriously I hated when she didn't let him in despite jasper broke up with Alice in phone. And Alice was right how can Bella just believe what Alice said gosh couldn't Bella understand Alice was manuplating her gosh. I enjoyed the chapters where Bella and jasper were friends and then their relationship those were the best chapters in your story but when all that drama happened with alice and how bella didnt give jasper chance I couldn't take it. But I wanted to see what Bella reaction would have been when Alice told the truth and how jasper would have redacted towards Bella. Couldn't believe jasper just forgive Bella like that just loveeee jasper he was so so selfless hayeee perfect jasper but Bella didn't deserved her being easily forgiven in my opinion. Leave it overall a good fanfic but the Alice drama and Bella being like that killed it for me in last few chapters but loved it when jasper was so selfless in end. Thanks for sharing the story. |
| Isobel Caruthers 3/18/13 . chapter 4 I love how this is moving! You really aren't pushing anything at Bella too soon and Jasper's character is depicted in a spectacularly similar way to the original novels. Wow! P.S. Your style is fantastic! |
| Guest 3/18/13 . chapter 10 Shoots! This is giving me goosebumps! U are an amazing writer! Pls don't give up ur talents! I love every chapter u have written so far! U must be famous already!i must be so behind! Lol |
| JaeHwa17 3/18/13 . chapter 9 gosh im so behind! i didn't realize how long ago this has been written/posted. i just started getting into Fanfiction and this is my first book to read up on. and tbh, I'm loving it! no disappointments! i need to find more ur writings! |
| JaeHwa17 3/18/13 . chapter 8 oh yeah! she sure did! man, i am seriously loving this! ur an awesome writer! pls keep up the gr8 work! |
| JaeHwa17 3/17/13 . chapter 7 oh em gee! im super stoked! i love how u ended this chapter! i got goosebumps and everything! LOVE! LOVE! LOVE IT! |
