|Reviews for Golden Moon|
| ash 7/28/12 . chapter 55
I LOVE YOU omg i loved this. ive read it like 5 times already. the pace seemed almost perfect and they acted like they would...i think. lol but your amazing keep it up!
| alanneau2 7/24/12 . chapter 54
Thank you for a wonderful story filled with romance, drama, friendship and love.
Best, Ann in SC
| alanneau2 7/22/12 . chapter 9
Good story...want to hurry and get to Jasper and Bella pairing up!
| Cullen Cousin 7/15/12 . chapter 1
I know I started reading this before, cause it all sounds familliar, but I just can't remember! Oh well... a good story is always worth reading again!
| werewolf hunny 7/12/12 . chapter 2
I like your bella. strong and brave.
| Guest 7/7/12 . chapter 55
I do have a fan fiction profile Twilight-Jacob-Lover, but fan fiction is being stupid right now and won't let me log in. :(
and now onto the serious reviewing part. This story was AMAZING. Definitely my favorite Jasper and Bella story. I always loved the idea of them together because it seemed so forbidden, and you seemed to capture that perfectly with this story. I found this in the Best of the Best; 1000 community because I find stories that are already finished and have received great reviews to be the most interesting and this is completely the best one. This story has so much stuff going on that I found at least 3 places where it could be split up into different stories! But I think the length is what kept me so intrigued. I was always wondering: "What else could she jam-pack in the next parts?" And let me tell you, you always delivered. I was worried at various parts that J would go all Edward on us with his stubbornness and much more restraint with Bella than I would have liked [;)] but by the end of the story, I understood why all of that happened. And reading the outtakes in "Jaspers Golden Moon" also helped quench my J/B thirst. I also liked that E wasn't part of the story at all. A lot of the Jasper and Bella stories try and bring Edward back to try to show his remorse (however real it is or isn't) about leaving her and it tests her faith in her and Jasper's relationship, blah blah blah (I'm sure you've read those types of stories) but this was just refreshing, sort of like a new beginning for everyone. Overall, the story was awesome, you have amazing writing techniques, and I look forward to reading anymore stories you have up your sleeves!
I really would like to hear your feedback on my review so please PM me at my profile. Once again: Twilight-Jacob-Lover. Thank you, and keep writing! :)
| love-life.live-love 7/1/12 . chapter 27
This is my... What, like fifth time reading this story. I love how Bella and Jasper aren't OCC, but yet you've changed them enough to not make me want to punch Bella in the face - sorry, but that's how I feel sometimes...
Anyway, the character dynamics are great, and there's an undertone of sexual tension there which sets the mood but isn't strong enough to ruin it like I've seen done in some other stories. I can honestly say that there is nothing about this story that I would change if it were me. It is as perfect as if Stephanie Meyer had written this herself - maybe even better if you add in the fact that I don't, for once, want to punch Bella in the face.
I think it's a shame you're not going to continue this with a sequel, but I understand that after a while you kind of get over writing about Twilight. I'm the same... But I try to keep going with my stories for the sake of not leaving anyone behind. Still love to read them though ;)
Anyway, if you ever change your mind, I hope that I'll be one of the first to know and eagerly await more Jasper and Bella tales from you.
Now, back to the reading :) Sincerely,
| bkhchica 6/30/12 . chapter 54
I wasn't sure if I would like this story, being such a fan of Edward, but I ended up really enjoying! I got so into it in fact, that I am still up at 4 AM to tell you how much I liked it, Lol! It really was a good story, a little to angsty in places for me, but I just had to know if J&B were gonna finally see reason in this story. It was very well told! Thanks! :)
| LuckyStar0489 6/28/12 . chapter 23
Haha my name is Trina! XD I don't hear it that very often without it being Katrina!
| Luna umbra 6/18/12 . chapter 54
Oh my god! What an absolutely amazing story! I was working on an entrance-essay for a university, but I simply couldn't stop reading!
You write so amazingly well. You write with just enough detail, humor, exitement and thrilling moments that it's really kind of breathtaking.
Thank you for sharing this story!
| brebre14 6/15/12 . chapter 39
i like this chapter an all..but when r they gonna get serious and they start dating?...i luv bella being with jasper..much bett than edward...never really liked him all that much he can b too uptight lolz
| alltimelowfreak11 6/15/12 . chapter 54
just finished reading it all, and i loved it! i couldn't stop took two days and going to bed at 4 in the morning but it was totally worth it. the way you described things was just like huh never thought of it that way, and the songs you put in it were amazing! but yeah liked it said, loved the story :)
| Light on the Horizon 6/12/12 . chapter 55
Brilliant story. I don't normally read Twilight fics as the Edward-Bella relationship always seemed rather unhealthy (not that this stopped me finishing the books), but I loved this story as you made Bella more dimensional and less dependent. :)
| indian walker 6/12/12 . chapter 1
Loved the story! Interesting plot twists! :) Thank the ladies at fictionators for the rec.
| Marry me Jasper 6/4/12 . chapter 11
That "darlin" ALWAYS gets me! I just love Jasper so much! :)