this is amazing. I read this awhile ago and forgot all about it, poor poor Hephaestus. I love the writing style as well, it is fantastic.

ZELOS

Zeus is an a hole, lol. And Hera is nice in here, cool.

Awesome job. I enjoyed reading it, archaic language is so nice.

I LOVE THIS!the archaic speech is just so awesome. its rare to find something like this on fanfic. i am so faving this. keep doing what you are doing.

Nice version of the original myth!

wait, was it athena that had the child or earth in your story? i got a lost. but i remember that it was earth that had the baby

Woot! Fabulas as always to loved the fourth chapter when Athena got Erikhthonios, its so nice to see some Mother and Son bonding. I felt kinda bad for Hephaestus though, shutting himself out from everyone. As for the fifth chapter as I've said before go Hera! She really is a total doll. Feeding Erikhtonios like that :D Can't wait for more! Keep up the amazing work.

Later

Squee! I love it! You are going to put in the son aren't you! I love how you've portrayed Zeus it is, in my opinion, completely acurate and go Hera I always thought that she was just missunderstood and always hurting due to Zeus' infidelities. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

Later

Yay! Another chapter in one day! I love you :D Soo is Athena gonna extact her revenge upon Poseidon in the next one. Oh I hope so :D hehe. One question though are you going to include Athena and Hephaestus' son in this fic seeing that you know the myth I'm guessing you'd know who. Anyway great chapter totally cannot wait for more! :D

Later

Wow, great job on this myth! I love how you've portrayed Athena and Hephaestus, it was very believable and realistic. Please continue this. I look forward to more.

Later

This is really good! I liked it a lot; lot's of drama and emotions. And I liked the end. Poor Athena, though!