Aw, this is a good story! I like it!

Aww. :)

Wow! I just finished all seven chapters and that was so good! I've been looking for a good pre-TPM story with Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, and this one was great. And not just the story itself, but your writing is excellent!

Keep up the great work!

Shye

Aw... this was such a great story. You are a great writer.

Hey! Good Job! Great Story! I feel so sorry for Obi-wan! Poor guy has it rough, doesn't he?

You are the best writer that I have had the fortune to come across. I love all your stories. I've read em all. Great job, I'll get round to reviewing them soon. Love your stories, continue the great work. (I'm also known as Jack Sparrow's Secret Lurrver)

love it so far

this is a good story. continue please.

Awww! I feel the tears welling up now! That was such a sweet story! I odn't know what you were talking about, That is one of the best stories I've read! You described everything so vividly, and got Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon just how I imagined they would be. Please keep up with your writting! You do such excellent work! *Visage*

*smiles* what a choice story!:D i truley enjoyed reading that...never stop writing...or almost as importantly never stop posting your writing...

Hey - I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. Though it would be nice if you decided to expand someday. I would like to know how they got captured and such - but thats your choice.

Anyways - thanks for the story!

*sniffles* Yaaaaaay! Happy endings! I love it! Thank you for sharing a great story!

WOW! yo this story rocked! u have definete talent. KEEP USING IT!

I loved to read this. I liked the characterization of the minister, that was great comic relief.

Well, i read this On Silverdragon's page and just loved it there. I hadn't realized that you had put it here, on ! I am so glad I finally got to tell you what an excellent story this is! It is so totally agnst! Anyhow, I loved it.

Blazer