This is probably the cutest thing I've ever seen develop out of an almost-angst beginning. I love the characterization - flawless (if you'll forgive the horrible pun)- and even the backstory, which was dramatic without being unoriginal. =] Job well done.

That was really cute. Nice job.

Wow, I can really relate to this picture you painted of Riley. I have never been in love, and I can't seem to enjoy the ride without worrying about breaking someone's heart.

This was really believable as far as Riley and Greg's characters go. Which I really love in a story! Great job. You should do more like this.

I'm not sure if I ship Riley and Greg yet, but I really do like their relationship so far, and you captured their characterization very well. I enjoyed it. :)

Aww i love this story. Riley is such an egnigma but she is sommewhat reveled in this. You should make a second chapter about their date.

Genius! You found a way to combine Dr. Horrible and CSI, and that simple fact makes this fic amazing all in itself.

No, seriously, I did like this. As human as they're obviously desperately trying to make Riley, I don't like her, but this was a very well-written character study based on the info we do have.

HAPPY DAYS

Aw I loved it. Your first few paragraphs were especially awesome in drawing the audience in. I'm crossing my fingers and hoping that you'll write more Greg/Riley.

Very adorable, I love it (not much of a surprise, there) :) The dialogue was amazing, and you wrote it all beautifully. Flawlessly, you could say (sorry if that was lame). Great work!

Aww, that was sweet. And Riley's right, Greg wouldn't care that she's not perfect. :) Good job!

I loved it! Please write more Greg/Riley, they're so awesome together!

Aww
I adore Greg/Riley
I loved this :]
Nice Job!
Kudos to you! :D